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The Death of a Dream
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Photography Artist: Bowie15 http://www.dreamstime.com/Bowie15_info The Death of a Dream ~ Who walked in the muddy waters? Who swam within the turbulent sea? Who carried the weight of burdens grief; Buried inside the harm of iniquity? Who wrote promises upon the wall of eternality; Wrought within the framed injustice of fate? Who stands guard to imprison wisdoms passage, into the knowledge of healing sate? Who gently envisioned love’s destiny embraced; Calling upon the name of virtues imbue soul; Chambered by the devote breast of divination's grace; Where wings to gracility's freedom were stole? Passage of moments to now wonder; The dream born of paths paved in guise; When held closely upon awakening, gone when the death of the dream cries… In silent vain for resurrection, the voices echoed in the hallways past… Memories live there forevermore; alone in all solitude’s despairing mask… (Written: February 10^th, 2009 1:30 p/m) In Joy, In Peace, In Grace, In Harmony of Love Embraced ~ Embrassé poétesse d'amour ~ poétesse romantique Copyright© 2009 Poetess Victoria L. McColley http://stores.lulu.com/poetessvictoriamccolley

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle

Reviewed on February 22, 2009

Amazing and gorgeous poetry,take care

Edwin

Reviewed by Jon Willey

Reviewed on February 17, 2009

your song, is sung blue -- for it "wears a despairing mask, alone in all solitude" -- the smile of peace and serenity do not dwell in the lyrics of your song -- much peace and love to you my dear friend -- JMW

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)

Reviewed on February 15, 2009

Oh this is exquisite work..am stunned..beautiful..am saving this one..thank you Victoria!!

Vesna :)

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Reviewed on February 14, 2009

Victoria,
The flow and the flawless rhyme only add to the poem's beauty. The question format seems to invite answers, forcing me to explore my thoughts. Love and Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by H Cruz

Lyrical and lucid; you bring color to your words with a depth that resonates with every verb! Good stuff. May the saint dip you in chocolate and strawberies and roll you in nuts, a little whip cream in the right places is always a plus. ;)

H.J./ J.C./ Joe Cruz

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Vickie~!

Fantastic image and your poetic creativity is superlative!!

Hugs,

Lance

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Very beautiful, the sound of waves... soothing dreams

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

HEAVENLY BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE YOUR WORDS!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by David cox (Reader)

dreams what a magical place to be, they can be wonderfull beautiful things and when they die we are left with heartache, but dreams can be reborn.
a beautifull poem i think it takes us all to a place where we have been.
realy ,realy beautifull.
i hope your dreams are reborn and you continue to share them with us all.
Dave.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on February 13, 2009

Pictures and word transport us to a ethereal world where there dreams can come true by the pen of a romantic poetess.

Georg

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Beautiful as is the photo!

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce

Reviewed on February 12, 2009

This was AWESOME poetry!!! I love those pictures too!! Wonderful choice!!!

Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

As norm Vickie, your words are touching to the heart. Thank you so for sharing.

Newfie Hugs from your friend, Rose

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

That is one fantastic photograph! The sadness that this enwraps in such a delicate fashion leaves one to sigh remembering what once was....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Gene Williamson

Victoria, what facinating words you choose to sing your sad song.
-gene.

Reviewed by Denise Edwards

visually stunning! may dreams never die, for you have foretold the tragedy of such an event! wonderful write, Lady V!

Reviewed by Felix Perry

The pictue opens the mind and your words run straight in to pause at the heart before being digested by the soul. Well done Vick...loved it.
hugs
Fee

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh

Just glorious!!! and that picture..ah,

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

I imagined you saying this poem in your beautiful voice, soothing me with your wonderful array of visuals and stunning lyrics.
This is an epic poem my dear Vickie!
Love the photograph, simply divine!
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "Vivianna"

Reviewed by J'nia Fowler

Beautiful photo and words to match. Hugs, J'nia

Reviewed by Linda Law

The photo and the poem are exquisite... hugs, lindalaw

Reviewed by Mary Lacey Desertrat

Victoria,

Your words sing upon the page. This is so stunningly beautiful!

Mary