You... (poem) by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on April 18, 2011

BEAUTIFUL...! AN ODE TO...LOVE! THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS & FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed on August 3, 2009

Beautiful, lovely, and oh so romantic. "You" has a lilting sweetness about it that infuses the soul and embraces a heart longing for love's fulfillment.

Now, Sweet Vickie, please share a touch of reality with me by making me a bowl of your great navy bean soup while I kiss your hand.

Yours with devotion,
Richard

Reviewed by Dark Knight (Reader)

Reviewed on July 30, 2009

wow...so captivating in your words-to hear you speak at a live event would be a joy

Reviewed by Jon Willey

Reviewed on July 29, 2009

with such stunningly romantic questions, who could possibly answer other than, yes? -- this poem goes into my book of keepers Vickie -- surely my very most favorite of all your beautiful poetry -- peace and love my friend -- Jon Michael

Reviewed by Gene Williamson

Reviewed on July 23, 2009

Stunning! One of your best, Victoria. One of my favorites.
The answer to all questions is Yes. -gene.

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle

Reviewed on July 22, 2009

Kanye West did a song called "Amazing" and I can honestly say that your poetry reflects it in every way :-)take care

EDWIN

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on July 21, 2009

Sometimes we are not the ones writing a poem, our hearts are, with an undeniable longing of what we wish or desire, of what we want to give or receive, words we didn't know were there aimed like an arrow to a heart which maybe is impervious of our existence.
Known or unknown, a passionate lovers tribute to...

Georg

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on July 21, 2009

A kind of love that is filled with purity and eternal devotion, so delicatley passionate....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on July 21, 2009

As passionate as passion gets when romance blossoms into love. Love is an uncertainty filled with questions that only time alone will answer but still soul to soul, heart to heart and body to body we must still seek the answers. Lovely work as always, but who would expect less from you Vickie.
hugs
fee

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on July 21, 2009

Truly a beautiful offering such as we, your readers, have come to expect from you, Vickie. Thank you. Love, hugs, and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on July 21, 2009

You can - Can you ... clever juxtapose of thought poetess. And the transition from consuming upon self to the act of selfless giving is perfect. Is it just me, or are you growing of late? I feel as if you are trying to rekindle something that is waning. I know the muse is powerful, and multi-faceted, and we can at times be inspired by just looking at someone in the market, or smelling them, or listening to them talk from a distance ... for some reason though I sense something strongly personal in this.
Words from a lucid heart
French vanilla and blackberries

Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)

Reviewed on July 21, 2009

Victoria, WOW!! Beautifuuly said, erotic, with so much passion and conviction. . . . .
My Best Always,
Deborah

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on July 21, 2009

Beautifully penned, tender and romantic.

Reviewed by Mary Lacey Desertrat

Reviewed on July 21, 2009

Victoria,

You have such a beautiful way with words. First drawing the picture and then asking your loved one to join you. Beautifully written and flows so smoothly.

Mary

Reviewed by David cox (Reader)

Reviewed on July 21, 2009

can you do one small thing for me?

Can you carve my name next to your inscription?

Can you engrave my touch within your beautiful heart?

Can you let me show you love pledging to avow your soul?

Can you let me be your devote promise never broken apart?

Can you share your intimate dreams of devotion?

Can you let me know the intricate depths of you?

Can you let me show you my impassioned emotion?

Can you let me be the one devotion�timelessly loving you?

I CAN DO ALL THESE THINGS! THANKS FOR A VERY TOUCHING POEM VICKIE THIS IS SO SIMPLY WRITTEN YET SO TO THE POINT, I THINK EVERYONE WHO READS THIS WILL BE ABLE TO CONNECT.