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Descried Visions
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This poetic inspiration didn't come from this Chachapoya Mummy- but it seems fitting since I don't think I will find an actual photo to depict what it is I see from this very visual inspiration...
Chachapoya Mummy http://www.livinginperu.com/features-250-history-mysterious-ruins-peruvian-warriors-clouds Descried Visions The dogma of tongues are forking in the succumbing road; Slithering quintessentially beneath intentions starveling lie… I looked with elements fire into the fainted haze of distant mirages; I seen black dromedaries saddled with antediluvian swords, and the imprisoned skeleton carcasses they had drudged for centuries… Living bones imprisoned of ivory tusks were making a watery tower appear. The historic waves crashed upon its translucent mossy stone walls; Dancing with the winds of prehistoric turbulence… I seen emeralds rarity upon seductive ruby passion, kissing sapphire robed savants with confessions… …as the all seeing eyes of contradictions drew meaning inside my mind’s stillness’s of disbelief, I peered deeper; As my soul approached like thunderous tides from archeries of beauteous onyx prisms… And then I seen a gaunt master of archaic deception cursing hatred into the impaled mammoth skies closing; Drawing scriptures upon parchments leather; Sealed with the briar cross of mortal wounds… And this is when my hazel green eyes welled from hidden pools of sorrows undeniable creed; Offering pious hymns from my traveling soul… Foundering inside foreign tongues…I spoke like blind lightening; Wondering where you were when preacher’s perfidy tried to harm truth’s descried visions into deafness? (Written: January 5^th, 2010 6:47 p/m) In Joy, In Peace, In Grace, In Harmony of Love Embraced ~ Embrassé poétesse d'amour ~ poétesse romantique Copyright© 2010 Poetess Victoria L. McColley

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on January 6, 2010

A compelling and unique write.

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Striking image that does reflect so well the passion and the angst that flows through this write.
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Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Vickie I think of you as one of the greatest when it comes to writing and often wish I could reach that level,however I believe I am as far as I'll ever go. Another great write shared by one of the greatest.

Your Newfie Friend, Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater

Reviewed on January 5, 2010

Agony of discerning religions and breach of faith in centuries of cover ups and perjuries...embers of faith turned cold in catacombs where mummies rest of embalmed inequities...Descried Visions has the sharpness of the machetes of the hidden tribes of the Amazon, the Flecherios, the arrow people living deep in the jungles of Brazil...where resides gold, oil, rubber, timber, slaves and souls of conquest, disease, and devastation...most died from centuries of disease and uncivilized religious decay while isolation maintains their cultural vibrancy...Descried Visions is archaeology's guesswork at decay and decomposing human elements of religion and politics and competing values that erase...missionaries trying to play God being shielded from their pastoral efforts to spread the Gospel...ritual slayings killing interlopers and wounding trespassers, and people wonder why..."The dogma of tongues are forking in the succumbing road;" Romantic Poetess Victoria L. McColley is wonderfully a few enlightened years ahead of 2012 when the Mayan Calendar breaks from the tribe...[Sage Sweetwater, Celebrity Firebrand Lesbian Novelist]

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle

Excellent poem.I enjoy reading it.take care