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Preaching Mire
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and now the smoke screen... "Preaching Mire"
Preaching Mire He is on a self service pedestal, built with lies of his derisible deceits. Self glorified by his own impersonations, He built himself up in weltering falsehoods… His many masks are filled with emptiness, his mouth the degraded breath of deceptions bile. Wallowing in depraved spoils of his destructive thoughts; Spiritual lightening strikes upon his pillars fraudulent clay… Revealing the truth of catastrophes within himself; Destroyed by his own passion of destructions swine; He wastes his time depraved to see true veracities; Cloaked in secrecy he withers inside his own prison; All the while unable to see between lust and love’s identity… Hiding in shame his fetish for the youth of precisian boys; He shakes his hand in motion to offer himself indulgence. And the object of his obsession cannot be broken down Unaffected by the vermin sounds of his preaching mire… (Written: January 22^nd, 2010 5:32 a/m) In Joy, In Peace, In Grace, In Harmony of Love Embraced ~ Embrassé poétesse d'amour ~ poétesse romantique Copyright© 2010 Poetess Victoria L. McColley ` Thanks for Visiting

Reviewed by Nicole Weaver

Reviewed on January 22, 2010

Vickie,
You speak of truth. It is truly sad that adults can engage in such deplorable acts. Yet much to my dismay, I worked with a teacher who is serving 52 years in prison for the very acts of which you speak. May God spare his soul .
Nicole

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

A powerful and meaningful write, Vickie. It is a tragedy and shame that such things go on. Love, hugs, and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Jms Bell

DEPRAVED MINDS....DESCRIBED TO A 'T'....HIDING FROM EVERYONE BUT GOD...AND THEMSELVES. BUT EVEN THESE I CANNOT CONDEMN AS HOPELESS...FOR I KNOW THE BLOOD OF JESUS CAN MAKE THE DIFFERENCE...PURGING WITH 'HIS' HYSSOP CAN MAKE THAT MIRY SOUL...WHITE AS SNOW. THANKS FOR SHARING AND GOD BLESS. LOVE, JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by David cox (Reader)

bravo! this is excelent so thought provoking Vickie.
superb piece of writing. Dave.

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Strong and intense message you are broadcasting and I hope the intended hears it loud and clear...
fee

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater

He needs to take a good look at what you wrote here...no amount of repentance can take away the vile perpetrator...his followers really have no idea...deception...he is a product of his own father's rejection as a boy...

~S~

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

No giant with feed of clay will endure against the push of a little truth.

Georg