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My Eyes Became Unknown
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day visions...

My Eyes Become Unknown

Iridescent gloaming encloses my quiescent thoughts
as I seen you there fluttering as gentle wind.
Sheer brocading fabrics were transforming
like cocoons of beatitudes revealing wings…

Your emotions canvassed across nacreous moons
over silhouettes of your body released to eternal rest…

You came from the darkness wading with freedom.
Your eyes birthed upon glorious beauties never seen.
Angelic bracelets released all your sorrows into crystals;
Capturing them like spiraling butterfly nets…

They dispersed into gracile rainbows reaching elysian prisms.
Curving and arching profusions over endless fields
where the sun rose and fell to sleep with heavenly peace;
Surrendering the stillness of quietude to my heart…a loving embrace…

I watch you ascend upon a glorious paradisial Eden,
and my eyes become unknown…filled with tears for you-
Knowing you knew I could see…

(Written: July 27th, 2010 3:51 p/m)
© Poetess Victoria L. McColley
 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "My Eyes Became Unknown"
Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on July 28, 2010
VERY BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on July 28, 2010
Vic as always you see the beauty even in sadness and that is indeed a rare treasure to possess. Even in broken hearts there is beauty for to have a broken heart is too have experienced love...
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Reviewed by David Maclellan
Reviewed on July 27, 2010
I am truly amazed by the poetic visions you come up with Victoria. Every time I read one of you poems, for a few minutes I am released into a world "birthed upon glorious beauties never seen" Wonderful!
Warm regards,
david

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on July 27, 2010
A Beautiful write great imagery
love & peace be with you

William

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on July 27, 2010
...day visions only? I doubt it, Vickie, for this is timeless, anytime and simply visionary. It's wonderful!

John

Reviewed by Dayvid Graybill
Reviewed on July 27, 2010
Great imagery and language!

Peace,
Dayvid


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