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Hiding Failure
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Riddle Me This: cloaking that smoke screen (pargetting duabs) between that cat and mouse no realism robs...
Hiding Failure Little did you know, I knew. Playing the game you choose to play Hiding secrets in the sand castles And climbing the highest limbs (over the heads of mindful acuity) But, I seen you there Just past the ethereal gateway Pretending to be the glorious perfumes Wilting the roses inside their thorns’ Dancing with the dragon flies And then too, the damsels of the wind tide Just to float on by Behind that ostrich feather Always hiding who you really are Leaving everyone to wonder …those who care to know that is To wonder what your dreams really are And why do you paint those imitation rainbows on the sidelines of your life vessel Posting your spinosity of rain dances Wandering about all those thunder storms Ducking and dodging behind the scenic views of reality I may never know You may never care for me to know either (for all I know) It’s your game after all And your life to paint anyway you choose And yours too, to hide, behind your canvas of choice But I wanted you to know, I see you You made many mistakes But I don’t mind your failing to hide I just want you to know I am aware of you… …and I see you Poetry by: Victoria L. McColley

Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)

Reviewed on August 26, 2012

Victoria, This is one of your most deepest poems
that I have had the privillage to read.

Deborah

Reviewed by Laura Fall

Reviewed on August 25, 2012

Truly a deeply moving write so meanigful and heartfelt as always your poems are outstanding and such a beautful photo Laura

Reviewed by Jms Bell

YES...HOW FOOLISH WE ARE BEFORE WE COME TO TRUST HIM AND BELIEVE IN GOD. WE THINK WE CAN HIDE THINGS FROM HIM BUT, PRAISE THE LORD, THERE IS A 'HIDING FAILURE' WHEN IT COMES TO GOD AND US. FOR THERE IS NOTHING HIDDEN FROM HIM ABOUT US. HE KNOWS IT ALL. BUT IN SPITE OF OUR FILTH, IN SPITE OF OUR GREVIOUS SHORT COMINGS, IN SPITE OF EVERY SIN WE'VE EVER COMMITTED...HE STILL LOVES US! THE WORD SAYS THAT EVEN WHILE WE WERE YET SINNERS...HE DIED FOR US. AND IT ASKS, 'WHERE CAN I GO FROM HIS PRESSEST? TO THE FARTHEST OUTREACH OF MORNING, TO THE DEEPEST PART OF HELL...HE IS THERE! THERE IS DEFINITELY A 'HIDING FAILURE' IF WE ARE TRYING TO HIDE FROM JESUS! WELL DONE, VICTORIA! A WONDERFUL WORK! THANK YOU FOR SHARING YOUR FAITH WITH US, SO BEAUTIFULLY. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by John Domino

Dear Vickie,

Fantastic poem!
I see you too.

Peace, love and Blessings,

John Michael

Reviewed by TONY NERONE

A written piece of love. A magic look into those beautiful eyes of yours.
Always
Tony

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

This is so thoroughly sad, Victoria. You seem to be inveighing someone who once touched you deeply; someone you can't find peace with for reasons that elude you. Your heart seems deprived and you're bewildered because you don't understand why. Even though you want to reconnect, and reestablish communication, you're angry, and, choose instead to belittle (and insult) to make a point. You seem to adopt the posture of a fierce female here, to these ends, like Gina Carano's character in 'Haywire' or perhaps Jennifer Lawrence's in 'Hunger Games' in an effort to drive your point home. This is very sad, Victoria.

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Vickie,
This is quite powerful poetry, my dear. He has no defense, you are definitely onto him...Tell me, should he be "someone that you used to know???"

Don't waste your precious energy on someone who chooses games over real life.

You are too good and beautiful for such nonsense...

Love and peace and light to you, my friend,
Amber