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Truths of My Eternal Spirit
by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse → (All Poetry by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse)
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...within the abundance of secret treasures

Truths of My Eternal Spirit I was opening my heart with the rivals of a stranger to know this very moment unaware of the paradigm shift pulling me into the surrender …a vortex of an abandoning dream rebirthing somehow within the eyes of sapphires this birth of my living life adorning innate emotions anointing the nectarous chasms of another lost soul who decorates my thoughts with beautiful wishes as I reach …reach …reach Seeking this unchained pursuit to embrace desirous passions embedded deep in the crux of my soul as I further open my heart’s vault to attentively see this very moment unfurling as rainbows and storm clouds Acknowledging myself recognizing my own essence this significance of who I am through these tender embodiments of love’s fertile beatific bounty spilling fruitful truths of my eternal spirit united by this heavenly divinity within me these sacred gifts gifting I am… Poetry Chronicles: Victoria L. McColley

Reviewed by Vivian Dawson

Reviewed on June 17, 2013

Spirits shining through
a stranger seeing and feeling
surely to participate as you are

Lady Vivian

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater

Reviewed on June 16, 2013

Empowering. A much-needed shift unleashed...you say it with such clarity that I recognize it in myself, that I've always known existed and I embraced my own heart and insulated it with something protective like that of quilt batting, but still, even with that, wasn't enough. Lucky for me that you quill Truths so that I may self-dose on your sacred gifts to get me on the path of retrieval, and I am doing fine with the concept...I am...

Yours xoxo
Sage

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Jerry is right. Your poetry is filled with seductive messages that this stranger admires to the core of his being, struck by the immediacy of your thoughts.

Ron

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton

Giving of oneself to a stranger, with passion and desires signalling something completely exhilarating and heaven-sent. These lines sent out the feeling and the hope of the completion on this "rebirthing" . . . "anointing the nectarous chasms / of another lost soul / who decorates my thoughts / with beautiful wishes."

You DO know how to send your messages, my soulful friend.