Unsolicited Thoughts (poem) by Dawn Anderson on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on June 5, 2010

THIS IS A INSTANCE WHEN THE 'BEAUTY OF SILENCE' IS GOLDEN... PERMITTING THE 'GIFT' OF TIME...TO WORK ITS MAGIC. A FINE WORK...WITH A 'WISE' MESSAGE. WELL DONE AND APPRECIATED. GOD BLESS AND LOVE, JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on April 29, 2008

YES! This is visual poetry! I do the same, it won't leave me till I write it! DOWN! then I'm told...Shareeee!
Great poem Dawn! Love the deep intense dark visuals!
Write On!
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Lady Shexooo

STay Positive! STay STrong!

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson

Reviewed on April 28, 2008

The statement you make is powerful / sad/ true and haunting...well done

Allen

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on April 28, 2008

My, my, but you are getting s-o-o-o good at this, Dawn / Taking a situation / Set it up / Embellish it / Put in the misery index / Makes me think of that old tune "Send In The Clowns."

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on April 28, 2008

they seem to appear at thier own will
lingering a while
Peace & love

William

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on April 28, 2008

Exceptional write that captures the pain and the healing that we all must go through in life's battlefield of emotions.

Fee

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on April 28, 2008

Yup, when I get the loop tape in my head, I just ignore it. Most things I have to get over, so I choose straight away in most cases. Being human, loved ones friends etc, those loops seem to be a little bit more to stop....

Reviewed by Cryssa C

Reviewed on April 28, 2008

How perfectly you have captured those unwanted thoughts that creep in to try and ruin our days.
Well done!
Cryssa

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on April 28, 2008

It is intersting how something can consume us,,, time heals.
This is excellent Dawn!
Christine

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on April 28, 2008

Powerfully penned believability, Dawn - well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen

Reviewed on April 28, 2008

excellent use of imagery. i appreciate your acknowledgment of the fact that we have to plod through the mire sometimes in order to reach a brighter shore.

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper

Reviewed on April 28, 2008

There are so many things written, yet unwritten, in "Unsolicited Thoughts" that insinuate, imply, suggest and remind us of all the personal perplexities through life wallowing in our heads that were healed only by time. Excellent write.

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on April 28, 2008

Interesting indeed sweet lady,enjoyed very much..well done...have a wonderful and safe day..also thank you so much for your sweet comments...Hugssss

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on April 28, 2008

well expressed--it is interesting how this can happen--and how those thoughts can drive our actions

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on April 28, 2008

Dawn,

I often wonder why thoughts, especially unwanted thoughts, are played out over and over in our minds. Do we lack self control or is there a power out there that lives to make us suffer? Thoughts fade but do they really ever go away? Love, Peace and Blessings Always, Paul.

Reviewed by F William Broome

Reviewed on April 28, 2008

I'm in agreement with each and every word. You're on a roll, Lady! - Bill

Reviewed by Ted Bossis

Reviewed on April 28, 2008

Socrates & many others in the pathway of search .~. evol Ted