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To Possess the Wind
by Dawn Anderson → (All Poetry by Dawn Anderson)
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It was the summer of her seventeenth birthday –

He was barely eighteen.

They sat side by side in the grass, their knees slightly touching.

He observed quietly as she constructed a chain made of daisies.

They shared sandwiches and secrets beneath a hot

August sun.

 

When finished, she held up the necklace she had

Made with the blossoms.  Smiling softly, he took it from her

Hand and placed it in her hair.  Ever so gently, he

Brushed his lips against hers,

And in those few moments,

time seemed to stand still.

 

That was the summer of first love’s glances,

Salt air kisses and warm ocean breezes…

That simple, yet extraordinary summer,

When they seemed to possess the freedom of the wind.

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "To Possess the Wind"
Reviewed on May 21, 2008
This is beautiful, keep these coming
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on May 14, 2008
But then life happened... and they looked back and wished for those simple and uncomplicated times of life once again...but they were part of their childhood, and were hard to recreate. (At least that is the way it happened in my life. :~))

Cryssa

Reviewed on May 9, 2008
Oh Dawn, how lovely. So simple and profound, so real.

Kathy

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on May 9, 2008
Delicate, gentle and genuinely sweet

Reviewed on May 9, 2008
Beautiful. Love every line of this poem

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on May 8, 2008
And in those few moments,
time seemed to stand still.

It does indeed seem as though time takes a pause in such magical moments. Sweet write, Dawn. Thank you for sharing it. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Shedding Light
Reviewed on May 8, 2008
This is the essence of life; to experience this type of freedom and love ... is the ultimate !!!

Harold M. Nash

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on May 8, 2008
Makes me think of 'Grease' when they fell in love over the summer,, this is so sweet!

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on May 8, 2008
yes, you have caught that breathless surreal moment of first love and kiss. Excellent Liz

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on May 8, 2008
A wondrous poem that captures the ethereal feelings of first love with eloquent beauty! Splendid Dawn!

ET

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh
Reviewed on May 8, 2008
Most romantic, most memorable....

Reviewed by L Hippler
Reviewed on May 8, 2008
Dawn, you really capture that magic and innocense of youth.
Larry

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on May 8, 2008
Ah, to capture the freedom of the wind. Beaufifully done, Dawn.
Gene.

Reviewed by F William Broome
Reviewed on May 8, 2008
Your sweet words bring it back, and if we will but stop in our fast tracs and listen, such beauty can be recaptured and savored.
'Tis a bit of beauty on a sunny morning for me. Thank you.
- Bill

Reviewed on May 8, 2008
Truly stunning, Dawn; very well penned/illustrated! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on May 8, 2008
Oh my,what a beauty you have written here sweet lady,well done...have a wonderful and safe day....Hugs

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on May 8, 2008
So beautiful for first love to remember those precious moments Dawn. Thank you for sharing.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on May 8, 2008
What a truly lovely and nostalgic piece!

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce
Reviewed on May 8, 2008
This is so beautiful!!! I can envision that beautiful scenario in my mind. Magical indeed!!!

Sandie May Angel :o)

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on May 8, 2008
I remember that day . . . Vividly . . . Wonder what the hell ever happened to those wonderful thoughts . . .

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
Reviewed on May 8, 2008
Lovely poem, Dawn. It reminds me of those days when me and my girlfriends would "read" the daises as we plucked off each petal right down to the last one: "He loves me, he loves me not"

Reviewed on May 8, 2008
A StormSpinner type of write - this is beautifully imaged - and felt! Like the wind - a soft, gentle zypher of love. Well written, Dawn!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis (Reader)
Reviewed on May 8, 2008
Your deep understanding of human psychology reveals itself in a most profoundly ideal, youthful, beautiful way; I love it.

Reviewed by Art Hernandez
Reviewed on May 8, 2008
Nicely written poem Dawn...your work is so filled with a depth of true emotion and poetic depth...you give us the very essence of thought and the view of love from within youth and time placed into a reflective memory....

very nice...

Art...

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on May 8, 2008
such a simple and innocent feel to this--i truly found it to be lovely

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on May 8, 2008
Stunning capture of a special moment frozen in time and in a memory freeze frame.

fee


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