Once Upon a Time (poem) by Dawn Anderson on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Reviewed on October 7, 2009

This one goes deep, Dawn. It makes me think of a miser growing old alone. Great Tanka. Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on June 7, 2008

You certainly have a gifted pen, thank you for sharing
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on May 31, 2008

Your thoughts say so much
with so few selective words
Brilliant composing
Love & Peace be with you

William

Reviewed by Cryssa C

Reviewed on May 30, 2008

You are amazing, Dawn!
Simply superb writing...
Cryssa

Reviewed by Art Hernandez

Reviewed on May 26, 2008

Nice work Dawn....unattended love can vanish as your thoughts so well express...a very nice expression of thought through poetry...

enjoyed...

Art Sun...

Reviewed by John Leko

Reviewed on May 26, 2008

...expressive poetry...given just the moment of few words...holds all the time in the world.
this is excellent Dawn...
John

Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER

Reviewed on May 26, 2008

This be no fairy tale, but real, you said it with charm, and nourishing wisdom, Blessings! Jasmin Horst

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on May 26, 2008

You have such keen perception Dawn! excellent sad poem!...ET

Reviewed by Gene Williamson

Reviewed on May 26, 2008

Well done, Dawn. You captured a life in five good lines. - Gene.

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on May 26, 2008

i agree-the last line sums things up very well-nice job

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on May 26, 2008

Last line is the kicker . . . What reality is for many people you have captured it here in poetryland . . .

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on May 26, 2008

Excellant tanka that captures and says so much about live and love. So many good relationships have perished because they were not nourished by both partners. Well done.
hugs
Fee

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh

Reviewed on May 26, 2008

Stunning write...as usual.

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on May 26, 2008

SO much said Dawn,,,Excellent.

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

Reviewed on May 26, 2008

NICE!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on May 26, 2008

You have said a lot withing those lines. Memories can vanish when left unattended. Thank you for sharing Dawn.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper

Reviewed on May 26, 2008

A melancholy write, and the last sentence caps the thought perfectly. People often get too complacent in a relationship and all the romance seems to fade into oblivion.

Reviewed by F William Broome

Reviewed on May 26, 2008

Yours are haunting words in a look back.

Mystery creeps in, and we wonder about events absorbed by time.

Your brief works continue to be well done

- Bill