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Change of Season
by Dawn Anderson → (All Poetry by Dawn Anderson)
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Change –

he recognized it

by the gray dismal sky

and

the chill in the air.

But

more than this,

he sensed it –

in the frostiness of her words

and

in her icy cold glances –

this

death of a season

 


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 Reviews of "Change of Season"
Reviewed by 000 000 (Reader)
Reviewed on November 17, 2008
Very unique poem...of an ending love.
CarolHawks

Reviewed by Donna Quesinberry
Reviewed on October 7, 2008
short, succinct, and driven

his loss i suppose

thank you, ~D.

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on October 7, 2008
Oh yes ... much of that going on lately - everywhere. Your brevity paints the reality with bold strokes.
Richard

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
Reviewed on October 7, 2008
Love it!

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on October 5, 2008
nice flow, inspired motif ...

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on October 5, 2008
an outstanding write Dawn
enjoyed
Love 7 peace be with you

Reviewed by Shedding Light
Reviewed on October 4, 2008
A very thought provoking write.

Harold M. Nash

Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on October 4, 2008
Dawn,
Amazing how one glance can say all of this. Nicely done!
Sheila

Reviewed by David Hightower
Reviewed on October 2, 2008
Dawn - This poem made me shiver at its images. Powerfully expressed.

- David

Reviewed by Susie McCray (Reader)
Reviewed on October 2, 2008
Sounds like she's ready to kick him to the curb or just finished doing it. Great write.

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on October 2, 2008
Beautiful writing sweet lady as always...Hugssssssssss

Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis (Reader)
Reviewed on October 2, 2008
Lovely writing, Dawn.

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce
Reviewed on October 2, 2008
Nice little poem about changes.

Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by J.A. Aarntzen (Reader)
Reviewed on October 2, 2008
With a few well chosen words you have written an entire novel. I love the phrase "this death of a season"

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
Reviewed on October 1, 2008
Exceptionally well done!

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on October 1, 2008
Dawn, once again your word choice and the precision of the images allow you to say so much so poignantly.
John

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on October 1, 2008
Your words always pierce me like the wind,,, EXCELLENT!

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on October 1, 2008
Excellent, Dawn. I say again that I love the way you write,
the way you think, the way you are. This is as beautifully
constructed "kiss off" as I've read. -gene.

Reviewed on October 1, 2008
Beautiful poem. Loss of a relationship is always hard.

Mary

Reviewed by Southern Comfort
Reviewed on October 1, 2008
The death of a relationship, described so perfectly! SC

Reviewed on October 1, 2008
Right between the eyes, Dawn - effectively penned observation, spot on excellence!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Bonnie May
Reviewed on October 1, 2008
Wow you killed it by the crispness of the powerful words. Well done. Love, Bonnie

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on October 1, 2008
Metaphors galore . . . Like this one very much . . . Stand. Take a bow . . . Applause . . .

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
Reviewed on October 1, 2008
disturbing imagery! (I mean that in a good way!)

Reviewed by F William Broome
Reviewed on October 1, 2008

Fall done fell on that po' boy, and he ain't nothing but a pile of brown leaves waiting for the chill of her wind, blowing him away!
This, my dear poet, is neat writing, and I see your pointing and shaking finger... right at us men. - Bill

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on October 1, 2008
Short, direct and like a sucker punch to the heart. well done Dawn...

hugs
FEe

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on October 1, 2008
Chilling, indeed; cold words and icy cold glances can really bring a chill anywhere.

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on October 1, 2008
Changes for sure it is that time as one season dies of to share with us the next. Thank you for sharing Dawn.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on October 1, 2008
Aptly put in this metaphor beauty.

Reviewed on October 1, 2008
Wooooooooow this is so beautiful, Dawn. Well expressed observation

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on October 1, 2008
Very nice, very talented!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
Reviewed on October 1, 2008
CHILLY! You've sure captured the metaphorical essence of the changing seasons from a human aspect. Nicely done.


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