Insights into our own lives so often seem to pop up from reading of the lives of others who came before us......kind of an analogy here...like fire in the sky.........Jerry
Hi Dawn, your verses are indeed filled with wisdom and deep understanding of the human limitations. This will not fail to captivate the attention and imagination of the readers. Enjoyed.
Wise words in this poem, Dawn. I can really relate to the 3rd verse, too.
Sheila
Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis (Reader)
Reviewed on January 25, 2010
I love this, Dawn. You are so genuine and your truth lifts off from the page shedding its light on your readers - warming them - reassuring them that they, too, are afterall, just fine.
I love this, Dawn. I really felt this poem strongly. I also enjoyed how you showed such piercing clarity of description to awaken the emotion of your piece to the reader. A keeper. Love, Michelle :)
MISTAKES ARE ALWAYS ALLOWED....NO MATTER ONE'S INTELLIGENCE...THE CREATED HUMAN...WHO CAN TAME...BUT GOD? GREAT WORK...THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS. LOVE, JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
What an astute observation! I love how you brought your thoughts together to form a magnificent poem!
Here's to the journey and the fun along the way.
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
Ciao, Bella
The world is flat I tell ya. Mistakes will always be made, it's human. My favorite mistake was Einstein deviding by zero. One must experience contrasts to have a preference. It's always a sign of success when a writing makes the reader think. I enjoyed.
Nice work Dawn...wisdom is a lifetime of learning and enjoying life itself, when we can find ourselves within the discovery that we learn not only by our mistakes, but that we are not alone in them, even the greatest of scholars and intellects have followed the same path.
An interesting write and a fine point is made at the end. In fact, I doubt that few things in life was ever accomplished without mistakes; thus, they are stepping stones toward achieveing the best one can achieve.
I try...really...to make peace with foibles where ever they be.
Mistakes- I seem to forgive others with abandon- but myself...now there I consider the death penalty for typos. (So you might avoid pointing them out. LOL)
This was a beautiful perspective.
I'll never forget one headline I saw years ago. It said something to the effect that a galaxy thought to be small and close was actually huge and far away. It made me wonder if the Hubble telescope folks were looking through the right end.
Take it easy.
Absolutely! The woman is in good company. I have come to the conclusion that our mistakes are subconsciously made to liven up our otherwise dull, repetitive lives . . .
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Nicely written Dawn.
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wisdom adorns your wonderful written thoughts
love & peace be with you
Best wishes,
Sheri
Sheila
Here's to the journey and the fun along the way.
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
Ciao, Bella
wise words,
carolyn
Newfie hugs, Rose
Regis
nice thoughts...
Art Sun...
Your poem is a rare perspective; one admitting tat all humans are fallible and open for leaning. Fresh writing here - a joy to read and absorb. - Bill
I love how you find a meaningful link here and then give it 'the treatment' in your special way. This is so worthwhile.
John
Anderson now - are congratulations in order? If they are, Congratulations, Sweet Lady!
jf
Larry
learn from them... hopefully. I didn't know that
about Galileo... Wow!
'And although she proclaimed herself
a “summer person,” she learned to
appreciate winter and all it revealed.'
I need to remember this... I'm a summer person too
and need to appreciate winter lol you're right.
Mistakes- I seem to forgive others with abandon- but myself...now there I consider the death penalty for typos. (So you might avoid pointing them out. LOL)
This was a beautiful perspective.
I'll never forget one headline I saw years ago. It said something to the effect that a galaxy thought to be small and close was actually huge and far away. It made me wonder if the Hubble telescope folks were looking through the right end.
Take it easy.
John
Your words always amaze me and in your exploration, you have done it again. Thank you for sharing.
Warmth and Love to you, Carin' Spirit
Christine
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destination that caused her
happiness, but the journey itself
How true so often, for many.
Georg