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Eden's Temptation
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EDEN'S TEMPTATION A Huitain about Fruit Anxious, you wait, silently so. Blushing, amongst green leaves on trees, I sense you, hear you, as I go. Your rich perfume, my mind takes leave of its senses--I follow bees, drunken by your aroma rare. As wind blows leaves away, I see Eden's temptation, if I dare. The huitain contains eight lines, with eight syllables per line.(ABABBCBC)

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Reviews of "Eden's Temptation"

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson

Reviewed on June 19, 2004

Very, very Lovely!

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on June 18, 2004

oh this one Jo is creative and excellent!

Reviewed by m j hollingshead

Reviewed on June 17, 2004

very nice

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on June 16, 2004

Very creative. Enjoyed!

Reviewed by ya mama (Reader)

Reviewed on June 16, 2004

nice. good to see one trying to experiment with form.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on June 15, 2004

Jo, a stellar write!;-) Really a beautiful
cosmic poem!I like the huitain,have to try it;-)

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on June 15, 2004

So glad to read you again Jo...
You still got it...
Thanks for your review........(0:

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on June 15, 2004

Very creative. I'm learning something new here. Thank you for sharing.

Sandie May Angel :o)

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on June 15, 2004

i like it, jo! well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, your tx. friend, karen lynn. :D

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