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To Touch Eternity
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A Prime poem about love.


The following poem is a "prime," consisting of the following number of words per line: 1,2,3,5,7,11,13

 

TO TOUCH ETERNITY

Love
Blinding light
Room goes dark
Heart electrifies, words go unheard
Leave dull earth behind, soar to stars
With trembling hand touch sweet eternity and join angel chorus singing
Before reality grabs you back, making you wonder if love ever really happened.


 




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 Reviews of "To Touch Eternity"
Reviewed by Jane Rodway (Reader)
Reviewed on September 1, 2004
Yes, that is sometimes how it feels, especially when the love is intense. Good poem.

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on August 31, 2004
excellent........(0:

Reviewed by Susan Barton (Reader)
Reviewed on August 29, 2004
"Before reality grabs you back, making you wonder if love ever really happened."

Love can't be just a dream? :)

SueB

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on August 29, 2004
never doubt it ...

i like this genre and the motif ... well done!

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on August 29, 2004
i love the form and the poem JO.

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Reviewed on August 29, 2004
Wonderful love, hope it last.

Sandie May Angel

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on August 29, 2004
You really captured the feeling of wonderment!
Beautifully done Jo, good to see you;-)!

Reviewed on August 29, 2004
This was lovely and also kind of sad, very beautiful,

Reindeer


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