such a basic, primal need. air, love...i appreciate the paucity of word usage here, you use only what's necessary, not expending energy in extraneous metaphoric construction, which only builds a sense of airiness, in perfect compliment to your subject. well done, poet.
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I will send a message after I get my breath back. Write on! 'Pea' <3
Regis
Romantic daring demanding, "Love Me Like Air" flows from the fountain of desires.
Enjoyed the reading of "Love Me Like Air".
I salute You, Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
TRASK
rocks great write
William .....Peace & Love
The whole poem is great!Beautifully written!
Love,
Eileen
Thanks for your comments
With love
Ron