medium to light brown sable red blue-black or ivory-toned vermillion-skinned beauties slender and fey short-statured and tall thickness on display round curves and wispy hips undulating with the rhythm of nature's blessings gazelle-like gracefulness captures this man's fancy ebony raven shades of brunette and ash blonde kinky wavy or straight short and long haired sirens wail seductively rotund breasts fecund in their bounty or perky perturbations taut aureoles with nipple-thrust visible through sheer cloth is like broth to a sick man's soul high-cheeked wide browed Women with almond shaped eyes green blue brown and black inviting sensual delights so pleasing to my sight smooth skin soft and so sensitive to the touch passion's heat whispered with the oooohs and aaaaaaahs of Love's breath
all Women are mysterious with the capacity to make men delirious beauty so sublime both in body and in mind the penchant for today's society to underestimate the depth of Woman's wisdom is sinful the style of a young Girl's wiles the elegance of a Woman's statements the earthiness of a Mother's worthiness the reality of a Sista's mentality all i can do is write the truth these words fall far beyond reproof witness to the fear that men retain the distaste they relate to a Woman's brain
multiple conversations held simultaneously meaning gained stored and synthesized new threads broken from original thoughts returning intact to create a tapestry of interaction far beyond the ability of most men to grasp
the birth process holy invocation of Sun Moon and Stars gentle thrumming of life's first gasp within the womb growing coalescing in mysterious harmony feeding and molding the Feminine Principle into mood-shifting paradigms of depression delight and anger lust/love-filled and ravenous for sustenance willing to kill or be killed to fulfill her biological imperative
ecstatic multiplications of orgasms astound the single/double/triple-shoted stud thrusting ably into soothing wetness and warmth mind alight with visions of baseball games and statistical problems intent upon prolonging the moment while realizing that his ability to perform is entirely dependent upon the Woman beneath/over/beside him coaxing and cajoling his sperm calculating his endurance cooing and cawing her approval or disdain imperious to his overwhelming need for success
thrice-born vixens Goddesses in conception and form Women hold the key to eternity within them protected by magical spells and ancient invocations passed down through centuries of persecution awaiting the dawning of the New Spiritual Revolution men sense this truth with trepidation decrying the soulful desire for completion in favor of the material need for subordination
Beauty defined lies in the eyes the Perception of Perfection is subjected to the mind neither form nor feature creates the spiritual mold broken after each cast with infinite variations of ear and nose lips and mouths breasts thighs and soulful eyes body types abound each perfected upon the shining wheel of the Divine Potter intent upon her art she casts poetic clay far and wide in her conception of Eternity
through these fields of Beauty i wander my artists eye capturing the essence of purity and wantoness evident in glances held too long appreciative smiles coming on too strong hips swaying seductively in tune pronouncing the inevitability of my Sexual Doom to continuously fall in Lust is an invitation of damnation a destructive occasion to any relationship's foundation a denigration of God's purpose a remonstration against lack of focus
the veneration of Woman's perfection can be achieved through the acknowledgement that She is Heaven-sent meant for man to worship in the form of Divinity the Holy Trinity of father Mother and child a representation here on Earth of an eternal principle that knows no boundaries despite the prognostications of patriarchial elders long passed to dust and infamy
Aquarius rises in her eyes the delight of inner sight reveals what is oh so plain to see that all are worthy of Divinity that Beauty is the sum of all that's in me that i apply to you in lieu of objectivity i see flames of understanding dawning on the horizon of man's rule as inevitability becomes reality and true relationships transcend the structures of meta-narrational fractures that have divided Humanity for too long sight unseen we ascend attendant upon the fruitful Tree of the Goddess of Perfection and Peace and though the rotation of Universes never cease i shall acknowledge Woman's Beauty until we are Free
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Reviews of "Aquarius Rises"
Reviewed by Susan Sparks (Reader)
Reviewed on November 14, 2003
MARK: This has GOT to be one of the most exquisite poems I have ever read. If all men were like you there probably wouldn't be very many problems in the world. I can "feel" what you write--can't say that about too many poems. Keep right on writin' on!
This was outstanding, absolutely wonderful! loved this so much,
Reindeer
Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on November 4, 2003
Goddesses in conception and form
Women hold the key to eternity within them
protected by magical spells and ancient invocations
passed down through centuries of persecution
awaiting the dawning of the New Spiritual Revolution
men sense this truth with trepidation decrying the soulful
desire for completion in favor of the material need for
subordination
..indeed an exquisite write..depicting the rise of the Goddess..in the New Age..
Thankyou!!
Vesna :)
Speechless! First the montage intriguing, then the poetry spectacular! You are very savvy about women!;-)
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on October 29, 2003
This is a beautiful tribute to all that is woman and her place in the balance of all that is mankind. Great write.
Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Reviewed on October 29, 2003
~WOW~
{{{{Mark}}}}
This is a brilliant masterpiece in every way...form...shape...content...and of course being a woman I can NOT leave out tribute!!!!
~Nikki~
Reviewed by fare good (Reader)
Reviewed on October 29, 2003
My king words cannot sum up the wisdom that you posses. The master who holds the pen. Wisdom comes with God, and the stroke of your pen follows the books of pslams. Thank you for allowing me to feel the essence of a true king. Your words are powerful.
cool write, mark; enjoyed this very much! thanks for sharing this thought provoking write! :D (((HUGS))) and much love, your fellow texas friend, karen lynn in burleson.
Pecked to Death offers a refreshing perspective on managing the chaos of everyday life, encouraging you to take control and prioritize what truly matters.
Reindeer
Women hold the key to eternity within them
protected by magical spells and ancient invocations
passed down through centuries of persecution
awaiting the dawning of the New Spiritual Revolution
men sense this truth with trepidation decrying the soulful
desire for completion in favor of the material need for
subordination
..indeed an exquisite write..depicting the rise of the Goddess..in the New Age..
Thankyou!!
Vesna :)
Love Tinka
In Spirit,
Bear
all Women are mysterious
with the capacity to make men delirious
Well done!
"Aquarius rises in her eyes
the delight of inner sight reveals what is oh so plain to see
that all are worthy of Divinit"
Savvy indeed.
{{{{Mark}}}}
This is a brilliant masterpiece in every way...form...shape...content...and of course being a woman I can NOT leave out tribute!!!!
~Nikki~
Lovely write indeed!
May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
and we women appreciate your kind words and attention. :) and you'll never be free *tee hee*
beautiful write, enjoyed very much! :)
(((HUGS))) and love,
karla. :)