No Way Out Headache (poem) by Marilyn Seray on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Dan Zuewski (Reader)

Reviewed on September 9, 2004

ooh don't remind me of my migraines! they've been good to me lately... or maybe I've been good to my body and I haven't eaten any of my migraine triggers... either way this is a very vivid representation of a bad headache ;)

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on August 28, 2004

You convey the pain and emotions very effectively in these verses, Marilyn. Love and peace to you. Regis

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on August 24, 2004

pain Oh Pain!!!
Migraine destain!!!

You have my sympathy. My son has had migraines since he was a tot. Light was evil to him then and at any other time light was his inner source of energy. Nothiing can describe a bad one either. Great way to ease it with this poem though.
Migraines are no laughing matter....especially when they are clustered.
Susan

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on August 22, 2004

(((marilyn)))

ouch. felt this one--suffer with the monster of migranes, myself

powerfully and vividly written--hope you feel better soon

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)

Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster

Reviewed on August 22, 2004

Migranes..understand them all to well. Excellent write.

Hugs, Trish.

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on August 22, 2004

Been there.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on August 22, 2004

Hi Marilyn...I can relate...I sit here eyes flickering heartbeat racing like a formula F1 race...don't worry be happy...we will survive...I guess....lol!!
The moment the flickering goes...I will see the light again....dang the only timeI do have stars in my eyes is whaen a damn migraine strikes......lol!! I guess I must be thankful for at least have the priviledge to see stars....and my head does not go zoooooom-zooooooom from a nocker on the chin!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)

Reviewed on August 21, 2004

Good Grief, Marilyn, I don't doubt you for a second! We are told in writing class that our best piece will be from our deepest gut, our most familiar places... you've proven that entirely. Unpleasant as they are, you have certainly nailed it with this! Great work.. (now get some rest, if you can, poor thing). Sigh... katy xox.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on August 21, 2004

I hope you are feeling better soon. Headaches certainly do have a rhythm about them. Ouch good write!

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on August 21, 2004

Wow! You have my head pounding with you. this is potent
Marilyn! If it's a real headache I pray it passes soon.
Great write!