Bottomless Quicksand (poem) by Marilyn Seray on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Dan Zuewski (Reader)

Reviewed on September 9, 2004

hmm... I think I was "there" at one point or at least a place similar... numb, but comfortably so...
very strong writing here... words and emotions ;)

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson

Reviewed on September 9, 2004

wonderful piece of the threat
of returning to incomplete-ness
intense!!!

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on September 8, 2004

Most of the pools of quicksand have warning signs up all around it, if you know how to read them. Good poem.

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on September 5, 2004

Enter at your on risk.

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on September 4, 2004

I Never Met You Yet I Care About You,i.e. When You Can Learn To Shed Tear's Without Crying You Will Have Found (God)_

You Learn To Love Yourself 1st Then Somebody Other's Will Love You Too!

Great Emotional Serious Asking Write!

TRASK

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on September 4, 2004

Powerfully moving and enthralling verses, Marilyn. Thank you for sharing this offering. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on September 4, 2004

Excellent write
profound
well penned

William ... love & peace

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on September 3, 2004

(((marilyn)))

could feel the fear clutching the back of my throat--pain vividly expressed--hope you're okay

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :(

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on September 3, 2004

A deep write, indeed; and very well done, Marilyn.

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)

Reviewed on September 3, 2004

Wow Marilyn ... this is powerful!

Blessings,
Joseph

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on September 3, 2004

I can hear the sobbing in this, you really bring this poem to life..

Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga

Reviewed on September 3, 2004

Dear Marylin,

Oh how I understand these feelings only too well, never apologise for crying. If this is how you are feeling right now, just remember I care :) Powerful write Marylin.

warm hugs
Elga

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on September 3, 2004

This is indeed powerful Marilyn, anyone who has visited that place, never wants to return. Exceptional write.

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on September 3, 2004

very powerful poetry!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on September 2, 2004

Powerful Marilyn!!

Are you Okay girl???

Warm love Tinka

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen

Reviewed on September 2, 2004

Nicely expressed, Marilyn.