Death of a Heart (poem) by Marilyn Seray on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on January 23, 2005

So deeply moving, this is heartbreaking poetry, excellently expressed,

Reindeer

Reviewed on January 21, 2005

Emotively captivating and so human that no one can deny it's powerful meaning. Thank you for sharing this offering, Marilyn. Love and peace to you. Regis

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on January 19, 2005

Hot Romantic!

TRASK

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson

Reviewed on January 19, 2005

aching!!!
this is heart~ripped
but still in place
agony at it's purest...........

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on January 18, 2005

Touching poem...
Hi Marilyn.......

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on January 17, 2005

You paint a vivid scenario with all the classic splendour of a Michelangelo oil painting! This sweeps together heaven and earth with its passion in extremis and yet your lines are elegant and clean. It leaves me feeling quite breathless and you can almost feel those "tiny" hearts and sobs becoming choked and stifled. Excellent, Marilyn, and quite beautiful poetry. TY Kate xx

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on January 17, 2005

Hits the soul, as only a class poem can.

One feels the emotions, this write discribes..

Reviewed by Handsum Hart

Reviewed on January 17, 2005

OUTSTANDING!!!!

Reviewed by Tiana ~ (Reader)

Reviewed on January 17, 2005

So beautifully written and soul touching write, Mele! So wonderful to read you again!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on January 17, 2005

Oh Marilyn this touches deeply...I know the feeling all too well my dear friend!!

Welcome home!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on January 17, 2005

Deep gut touching write. Tho loss of love is unbearable at times. Great write.

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on January 17, 2005

sad but beautifully written ...

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)

Reviewed on January 17, 2005

Yes this is very beautiful. Nice and glad you are back.

Reviewed by Jack Roberts

Reviewed on January 17, 2005

Beautiful write Marilyn! Such a sad story though. : ( Good to read you again.

Jack

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on January 17, 2005

How beautifully painful to read. Gorgeous poem Marilyn, deeply emotive. I miss you so much My Friend.

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on January 17, 2005

Marilyn,

O, the emotions that play out as the poem flows along--from happiness to abject loneliness and depression

Convincingly penned, the reader feels your pain--well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Many powerful lines--among my favorite are

"...I wore you in my soul..."

and

"...the angels cry and their tears
fall upon my heart like acid..."

BRAVA!

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on January 17, 2005

Oh Marilyn, this is so special! Written with such impassioned emotions so deeply painful, I'm hurting from it;-)
Fantstic expressions and visuals. So good to read you again,
you have been missed my friend!(see mail;-)