Thoughts (poem) by Marilyn Seray on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on May 24, 2003

Yes our thoughts do find ways of expression and you've chosen a very healthy way of venting those thoughts and desires. Well written Marilyn!

Reviewed by Angela Velez (Reader)

Reviewed on February 27, 2003

this is "tight" if u understand what i mean otherwords powerful great
xoxoxoxo

Reviewed by times

Reviewed on February 27, 2003

powerful and very meaningful.

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)

Reviewed on February 27, 2003

Wonderful poem....from a lovely poet...ty, Dani

Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster

Reviewed on February 26, 2003

Beautiful thoughts, Nice write ~Trish~

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on February 24, 2003

Yes through inspiration...from heart to paper..thats how its done..nice one Marilyn...floria

Reviewed by Amor Sabor

Reviewed on February 24, 2003

There is no doubt that inspiration comes to you easily when gentle spirits and old souls connect to guide your hands. Love is so transcedental and that intensity never really dissipates. Your heart and soul are too receptive not to capture that inspiration as is evident in this write.
Amor

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on February 24, 2003

a writer's poem for sure! well stated! love, your friend in texas, karen lynn. (((HUGS))) :)

Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader)

Reviewed on February 24, 2003

Nice write and ur thoughts
And ur heart gave a wonderful piece of write for us too

~Sanilnath

Reviewed by Trixie Love

Reviewed on February 24, 2003

Marilyn, This feels
so warm and soothing.

Beautiful as always

Trixie :)

Reviewed by Trixie Love

Reviewed on February 24, 2003

such a nice, soothing reflective piece of writing, nicely done

Reviewed by Pat Arnold

Reviewed on February 24, 2003

Your thoughts were formed in the Heavens and you love is forevermore. How easy to forget the promises made in another time or place. Your heart is so pure. There is no
room for hate in your heart. Again, such wonderful thoughts. Pat

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on February 24, 2003

I love this, such a familiar feeling.

Reviewed by Ois�n Breen (Reader)

Reviewed on February 24, 2003

a poem for writers

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on February 24, 2003

Marilyn this is so beautiful....but if I am in deep thought...I start talking to myself and then my hands starts taking over.....and I can't keep them still.....lol
Love
tinka

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on February 24, 2003

Very deep in thought. Excellent.

Reviewed by awkward poet (Reader)

Reviewed on February 24, 2003

this is the kind of poem i love to read over and over. great write.

Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader)

Reviewed on February 24, 2003

this has a very other wordly feel to it which is so cool i bet though you are not the type to believe in ghosts huh? because this poem can be intepreted as seeing them but it also can be seen as the communicational energy between lovers and friends you are an exceptional poet who did a wonderful job on this poem

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)

Reviewed on February 24, 2003

Don't worry, be happy.
Your damn good!

Tony

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on February 23, 2003

When I read your work I do feel:
"the surge of my spirit
Calling; hoping to make a connection, and
Feel the passion and share the language that
My thoughts speak in"
Your writing speaks to me and this is a wonderful piece Marilyn
Chrissie x

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on February 23, 2003

I like this poem a lot. Expressed well.
Bonnie

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on February 23, 2003

Great poetry... I think this speaks for many.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on February 23, 2003

I really like this reflection Marilyn...it has a nice intimate feel to it;-)

Reviewed by Jack Roberts

Reviewed on February 23, 2003

Very nice Marilyn, as yours always are.
Jack

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on February 23, 2003

Marylin This is so good.
"Time and time again, my thoughts wander
Looking for solace, for some direction, and
They always come back to my fingers after
Making that connection with gentle spirits "
I love it.
Peg

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on February 23, 2003

Nice and wonderful thoughts here in this powerful write!!!

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on February 23, 2003

Just look at all the web connections you have here. I appreciate you and have the same wishes you do. it is a blessing to be here with peers who have the same creative juice. Who knows. One may meet a greater challenge here than anywhere else. Life works in mysterious ways and I absolutely love the surprises writing affords me...just like you do too.

Love,
Susan

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on February 23, 2003

I'm sure you can make a lot of good connections. Nice thoughts Marilyn!

Sandie Angel :o)