I marvel at your magnificent expanse
floating in slow motion, over the universe.
Drifting from one color to the next, I am lost
in your world, feeling your soft wind upon
my skin.
I feel your jet trails of peach follow me with
tints of blue forming delicate round circles,
swirling in sleek curly-cues. The steady
whispering puffs, create pillows of lavender
adding to your immense yonder.
This parallel travel with you - void of restraints,
and so free up here, is phenomenal.
I can propel diagonally through your formless
velvet or linger in your infinite breadth
Golden molecules of frenzied light not knowing
which way to go are pulled down by gravity to
a waiting ocean, causing a vibrato on its surface
A moderate indulgence of sea mist is your
scent. I am neither cool or warm, but wrapped
lightly in your vast ambiance.
I am ready – come for me and release me in
your haven of weightlessness and tranquility.
What a beauty...thanks for the journey into bliss! :)
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on March 1, 2003
Marily this is simply beautiful...glad I didnt miss it..sometimes I take a rest from AD for a day or two...it does get crazy...I love nature and nature poems and this was very visual..Floria
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on March 1, 2003
You have captured in words a feeling that is difficult to describe. Wonderful!
Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)
Reviewed on March 1, 2003
Beautiful Write!!
Ty
Tony:)
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on February 28, 2003
Super write
There is something about you and the sea?
Dear readers, this is my third book of poems, and inside are a special collection of what have turned out to be not only MY personal favorites, but also the favorites of many of YOU. Some of these have never been available in print before...
Welcome!
The poems in this beautifully bound book are a result of over twenty years of observations. Observations of the world around us and on the telecommunications network. All of the hate, love, heroism, disasters, and those who help.
Beautif
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Tony:)
There is something about you and the sea?
josie
I am floating on air..
beautiful soothing write...
Trixie :)
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