The Burden (poem) by Marilyn Seray on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Melissa Rives

Reviewed on March 14, 2003

Outstanding...one of my favorites from you!

Reviewed by Ed Lupinacci (Reader)

Reviewed on March 11, 2003

Outstanding write you touch the soul when you write and it flows throughout.

Reviewed by Russ Okamura (Reader)

Reviewed on March 10, 2003

Poetry in TRUE motion, this is a very wonderful write! Written with the PASSION of YOUR HEART!

Reviewed by Trixie Love

Reviewed on March 10, 2003

Another fantastic write...
Strong yet gentle...

Great one Marilyn...

Trixie :)

Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader)

Reviewed on March 10, 2003

Wonderful write

Sanilnath

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on March 10, 2003

Marilyn I can really relate to this..we can only carry so much "weight" sorrow before we break...great write..floria

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on March 10, 2003

wonderful write Marilyn

Reviewed by jing javier

Reviewed on March 10, 2003

outstanding!

Reviewed by Nancy D.

Reviewed on March 10, 2003

Powerful and moving write.

Nancy

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on March 10, 2003

Outstanding, Marilyn! Perceptive and powerful.
Chrissie x

Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader)

Reviewed on March 10, 2003

makes one think of different possibilities for that cloud awesome job on this amazing poem very cool

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on March 10, 2003

You score big points with this one.

Reviewed by Thelma Shutters (Reader)

Reviewed on March 10, 2003

Fantastic piece. Thelma

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on March 10, 2003

So unique and powerful, Marilyn.

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on March 9, 2003

"I tell myself that the cloud
is having second thoughts

I don�t want to be dry,
I want to be wet and
ease its heaviness and
let me carry some of the
weight."

excellent double entendre...

Reviewed by Jack Roberts

Reviewed on March 9, 2003

This is Very nice Marilyn!
Jack

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on March 9, 2003

wisdom couched in excellent verse...wonderful write Marilyn...

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on March 9, 2003

This was very moving..just love these lines:

I don�t want to be dry,
I want to be wet and
ease its heaviness and
let me carry some of the
weight.

Excellent,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on March 9, 2003

Marylin, this is excellent so moving so meaningful
Hugs Peg

Reviewed by Justin Wolf (Reader)

Reviewed on March 9, 2003

Makes me wonder if this isn't a metaphor for something else... Bravo.

Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster

Reviewed on March 9, 2003

A powerful moving write. Exceptional Marilyn.