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Standing on the top
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when life throws you curves
you either catch them or get
hit by them or if you can’t
do either, at least get the hell
out of the way but please don’t
stand there in the middle and
send off the wall stupid ass
mixed messages because by
the time they get to me, they
are mangled and senseless
what the hell do you think i am
a mind reader - well i'm not
and i don’t want to be
you talk indecisively
out your ass. you have put
yourself right in the middle
of life’s shit and you won’t
move. i'm tired of having to
make decisions under pressure
because you’re stuck there
saying whatever comes off
the top of your head
it’s time for me to keep my
mouth shut.
i wash my hands of it; from now
on…i’ll be “Standing on the top”

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 Reviews of "Standing on the top"
Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader)
Reviewed on March 29, 2003
Anger ...
Smiles ...
Sanil

Reviewed on March 29, 2003
Excellent! Powerful and perfectly clear!
Hope he hears ya,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on March 29, 2003
Marilyn this was so powerful and I could "feel" your anger and yet it made me giggle a bit because I know the feeling...some men think we know exactly what is in their head..like we are mind readers...I wish...LOL..great rant..you did well..hmmmm...I think you won..LOL...floria

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on March 29, 2003
powerful words....william

Reviewed by Josephine Bohen
Reviewed on March 29, 2003
i hand over my title of Rant Mistress to you...
josie

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on March 29, 2003
Good Lord Marilyn..glad to see I am not the only mad person here.....
You GO GIRL...I salute you in saying what I needed to say....Well done
Love
Tinka

Reviewed by Madame X (Reader)
Reviewed on March 29, 2003
I agree rise above...great write.

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on March 29, 2003
I have made more than one person here on this site pissed off when I said that they made better door than a window, and they should get out of the way. You are a regular "Smashmouth" you are.

Reviewed on March 29, 2003
Wow, potent message. Excellent write. ~Trish~

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on March 29, 2003
very strong write...BHUWAN

Reviewed by Christine Morell
Reviewed on March 29, 2003
This is very powerful. Better out than in Marilyn.
Chrissie

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)
Reviewed on March 29, 2003
Good Morning, Marilyn
Great but angry write.

yf
tony

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on March 29, 2003
Marylin,
YOU GO GIRL>>>>
This is so good.
Keep rising above it.
Peggy

Reviewed by Tiana
Reviewed on March 29, 2003
Good for you, Mele! Hope all is well with you and hope to catch up soon... (((hugs))) Tee

Reviewed by Jack Roberts
Reviewed on March 29, 2003
Well done Marilyn!
Jack

Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)
Reviewed on March 29, 2003
This is one powerful write!!!!

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on March 28, 2003
Wooohooooo I like a Woman who knows how to tell it! Great write.....Ty, Dani

Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
Reviewed on March 28, 2003
Yeah!! :) Liberation is always so invigorating! Thanks, Marilyn, for the strength in this piece.

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on March 28, 2003
Holy cow...and I bet the dumb a** still doesn't get it ? [smiles]
This is a splendidiferous rant.
~E

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on March 28, 2003
Wow! You made that clear enough! Good for you Marilyn;-)You did the best thing...Rise above it!Well done!


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