when life throws you curves
you either catch them or get
hit by them or if you can’t
do either, at least get the hell
out of the way but please don’t
stand there in the middle and
send off the wall stupid ass
mixed messages because by
the time they get to me, they
are mangled and senseless
what the hell do you think i am
a mind reader - well i'm not
and i don’t want to be
you talk indecisively
out your ass. you have put
yourself right in the middle
of life’s shit and you won’t
move. i'm tired of having to
make decisions under pressure
because you’re stuck there
saying whatever comes off
the top of your head
it’s time for me to keep my
mouth shut.
i wash my hands of it; from now
on…i’ll be “Standing on the top”
Excellent! Powerful and perfectly clear!
Hope he hears ya,
Reindeer
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on March 29, 2003
Marilyn this was so powerful and I could "feel" your anger and yet it made me giggle a bit because I know the feeling...some men think we know exactly what is in their head..like we are mind readers...I wish...LOL..great rant..you did well..hmmmm...I think you won..LOL...floria
Good Lord Marilyn..glad to see I am not the only mad person here.....
You GO GIRL...I salute you in saying what I needed to say....Well done
Love
Tinka
Reviewed by Madame X (Reader)
Reviewed on March 29, 2003
I agree rise above...great write.
Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on March 29, 2003
I have made more than one person here on this site pissed off when I said that they made better door than a window, and they should get out of the way. You are a regular "Smashmouth" you are.
David Hightower’s lyrically expansive meditation on the whims of fate and the unpredictability of the human condition fill the pages of THE HANGING MAN DREAMS with thrilling music and mesmerizing imagery. Hightower’s richly infused voice echoes the e
This book represents a thirty-day period of my poetry journal. Each poem addresses
the dominant thoughts occupying my mind during the early morning hours of a given
day.
Smiles ...
Sanil
Hope he hears ya,
Reindeer
josie
You GO GIRL...I salute you in saying what I needed to say....Well done
Love
Tinka
Chrissie
Great but angry write.
yf
tony
YOU GO GIRL>>>>
This is so good.
Keep rising above it.
Peggy
Jack
This is a splendidiferous rant.
~E