Raindrops (poem) by Marilyn Seray on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on March 30, 2003

This was so powerfully moving, That last stanza just touched me so deeply,

Reindeer

Reviewed on March 30, 2003

Great climax. Excellent poetry.

Reviewed on March 30, 2003

Which way do I go,
which direction should
I take ...my friend the only way is through that Golden gate of our Lord....At any crossroad there must be some turnoff or cul-de-suc....but I could not find that road ...as like you Yet..
Hang on there....everything happens for a reason.....even if that reason stinks...at least we have the rain to wash ourselfs in
Love
Tinka

Reviewed by Trixie Love

Reviewed on March 30, 2003

Hi Marilyn,
The entire write really got to me....

I know the feeling...

Hugs,
Trixie

Reviewed by Ois�n Breen (Reader)

Reviewed on March 30, 2003

a very solid well written poem that i believe inspires and requires further reads

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on March 30, 2003

Now I get it! It struck me in the middle of the night. Why

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on March 30, 2003

You express the darkness of depression brilliantly Marilyn
Chrissie x

Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster

Reviewed on March 30, 2003

Your last stanza packs a mighty punch. Excellent, as always ~Trish~

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on March 29, 2003

We are all mortals here and the fear within us, at times...it is a fierce part of the Psyche that calls for action. This is how we grow and tasting fears are like a baby's first step must be although we forget that fear we remember to walk. Life is details that we either pick up and place in our basket or leave behind to become invalids to laziness. I love your poem and what it does for my thinking depth.
love and peace,
Susan

Reviewed by Jack Roberts

Reviewed on March 29, 2003

Well done Marilyn! Very nice.
Jack

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on March 29, 2003

impassioned write Marilyn...beautifully done~ hope it's just your fine poetry;-)

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on March 29, 2003

Very well done Marilyn...hmmmmm get yourself a huge umbrella...all kidding aside..a really nicely expressed poem..floria

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on March 29, 2003

Aaaawwwww! You have captured the moment of helplessness very well. Good write Marilyn! Hope you�ll feel better very soon.

Sandie Angel :o) a.k.a. May Lu $*_*$

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on March 29, 2003

Wow, Marilyn. Well done. Depression is not easy to write about, nor express as well as you have. Bravo.

Reviewed by Brittany Ren�e

Reviewed on March 29, 2003

I love the same stanza Peggy did,
"I need to get away
but I have no place
to go, nowhere to
be safe from this
gloomy dark cloud
that holds the power
to drown me."

It speaks for us all, but most specifically for your own personal feelings, which is like the sprinkles of brilliance on top of a worldly cake ;)

Warm Love
*-Brittany-*

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on March 29, 2003

3-29-03

You Must Go Into Silence, Say All Evil Be Gone,Only Good & (God) Surround Me__So Be It!

TRASK