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Can You See?
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Nothing can break your concentration as I look at you watching me What do you see Can you see my breathing falter Do you see me tremble as I look into your eyes What about my breasts; can you see them swell for your palms And what about my dormant buds - can you see them emerge and harden; begging to have you expertly roll them between your fingers Can you see the shine of need on my silky skin Do you see my lips parting in thirst for just a taste of you Let me break through your spellbinding stare so our eyes can connect and burst in one fiery blaze that shoots straight to the heavens and sprinkles it with what we both now see � Copyright

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Reviewed by m j hollingshead

Reviewed on March 30, 2003

well done

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on March 30, 2003

This was so passionate and wonderful!

Reindeer

Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader)

Reviewed on March 30, 2003

very passionate and sensual nice job on this awesome poem

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on March 30, 2003

It is human to experience passion and relate it to others. It is human to need and have the urge. We are all blessed from you sharing with us.
Tave on and thank you for being whole and honest.

Love and harmony,
Susan

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on March 30, 2003

3-30-03

If Only It were True!

TRASK

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on March 30, 2003

Naughty, but well done.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on March 30, 2003

oolala! Very passionate write naughty girly!!

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on March 30, 2003

Marylin,
I am opening the other window,
sensual beauty.
Peggy

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on March 30, 2003

An impassioned lustful plea, Yeah!;-)Wonderfully written Marilyn...

Reviewed by Joel Raja Kumar J (Reader)

Reviewed on March 30, 2003

Very tastefully done, Marilyn.

Love from India - Joel -

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on March 30, 2003

Wooo sensual Marilyn...nicely done..floria

Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster

Reviewed on March 30, 2003

Wonderful senuality here. Trish

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on March 30, 2003

thats pure passion
excellent write

William

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)

Reviewed on March 30, 2003

Whoa, Marilyn
Terrific sensuality here. Excellent!!

yf
tony

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on March 30, 2003

Wonderful use of the sense of sight. Very passionate write.

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