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Coins
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Dreaming and living
In my world of
Fantasy gets me through
The days
But now I’m tired of the
Entrance fee.
I have no more glittery
Coins to give you.
Your hand is heavy with
What I have given you
If you’d just put the coins
To your heart, they will tell
You of my love
My love so heavy in your
Arms, you can’t hold it,
Instead, all you do is hoard
Drop and grin at the prospect
Of the faulty ride that you
Always take me on.

© MS

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 Reviews of "Coins"
Reviewed by Trixie Love
Reviewed on April 5, 2003
Hi Marilyn,
So sad yet so beautiful...

We must of been in one of those moods today...lol

Trixie :)

Reviewed on April 5, 2003
Marilyn, this is so sad, but very powerful and an exceptional write. ~Trish~

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on April 4, 2003
very heavy coins indeed! nice...

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on April 4, 2003
Marily those last lines are superb.. I love this poem..floria

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on April 4, 2003
Your emotions are felt through this

Reviewed by Josephine Bohen
Reviewed on April 4, 2003
pearls before swine
josie

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on April 4, 2003
razor sharp to the reader..venting of emotion

Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci
Reviewed on April 4, 2003
Marilyn,
Strong expression of a one way love! Your emotions are felt through this!

Hugs,
Maria

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on April 4, 2003
Beautifully done Marilyn!

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on April 4, 2003
Well done.......

Reviewed by Malachy MacFarlane (Reader)
Reviewed on April 4, 2003
A wonderful choice of metaphor, extremely well written. Really enjoyed this. Mal.

Reviewed on April 4, 2003
Wow...This one cut deeply, and touched me right in my heart, You write so very well,

Love this,

Reindeer

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on April 4, 2003
Great poem, Marilyn, wonderful imagery.

Reviewed by anne cunningham
Reviewed on April 4, 2003
like this... the one word title drew me in

Reviewed by Woman Words (Reader)
Reviewed on April 4, 2003
I love the images...this is so smart and sensitive

Reviewed by Christine Morell
Reviewed on April 4, 2003
I like this Marilyn...it's original and so well written
Chrissie

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on April 4, 2003
And we just keep on giving.

Reviewed by C. Gourlay (Reader)
Reviewed on April 4, 2003
what an interesting choice of words, great.

Reviewed on April 4, 2003
"Coins"... It comes as imagination met emotions.

I like it as it is. But I would suggest that the author consider revising and polish "Coins" because it could shine sparkling.

Keep posting.

Thank You.

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU


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