Lost (poem) by Marilyn Seray on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster

Reviewed on April 8, 2003

Wonderful creative write. Truly enjoyed!

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on April 7, 2003

fabulous write

William

Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle

Reviewed on April 7, 2003

Awesome write and picture! Good things come in small photos!
Jill

Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci

Reviewed on April 7, 2003

((((Marilyn))))
This is haunting, and oh how I can relate to that snowflake! But I do have to say one thing...when the snowflake melts, and turns into a puddle, it is a change, and something good always comes from change. We may not see it right away...but in change of form, there is always possibilities. Okay, I am getting off my soap box now! Ummm, yup, I can relate to that snowflake!

Hugs,
Maria

Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader)

Reviewed on April 7, 2003

this was so sad and hauntingly emotional hope you okay

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on April 7, 2003

This is a Gem Marilyn!truly superb!

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)

Reviewed on April 7, 2003

Excellent Write, Marilyn.

tony

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on April 7, 2003

This was so sad...but so well written, your a wonderful poet,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on April 7, 2003

Awwwww...how sad...and how creative. Bravo.

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on April 7, 2003

I'm sorry, the pic is there. It's a snowflake lost in the snow, therefore it can't be seen. I will see if i can make it a little darker...and smaller

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on April 7, 2003

(((beautiful))) (((HUGS))) and love, karla. :) no pic, BTW...guess that's what you call "white out conditions" HA

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on April 7, 2003

Marily what a creative imaginative write..what happened to the picture? it's gone.. floria

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on April 7, 2003

Excellent Marilyn! A profound, sad piece.
Chrissie

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on April 7, 2003

awesome write, marilyn! plz keep karla and i in your prayers; daddy is having open heart surgery thursday morning (single bypass); pray all goes well and that he has no compications. he is also facing back surgery (tumor in spine, drs don't think it is cancer; pray that one goes well, too!). love, your friend in texas, karen lynn. (((HUGS))) my daddy's name is don, and he is 72 years old. he lives in ohio.

Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)

Reviewed on April 7, 2003

Ohhh - this is so chilling! Sad ....you did w great job here. Liked the emotions...Teresa

Reviewed by Josephine Bohen

Reviewed on April 7, 2003

now how creative is that?
awesome marilyn.
btw i got my new bio pic up. something about size and jpg or some dern thing.
josie