What’s left
I really don’t know
You ask if I’m ok and
I say sure
Sure…silence
You’re light and
Cheerful
I’m beyond hell
Youre so even-
Toned and
Optimistic
I’m shaky, frazzled
And don’t care ‘bout
My mistakes
I can’t and wont
Correct anything -
But you go on
Articulating your
Professional tone -
it’s my investment
This one got to me, I felt this so deeply this morning, You are an excellent poet, and I enjoy your work so much,
Excellent,
Reindeer
Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)
Reviewed on April 8, 2003
Dear Marilyn, A a fellow New Yorker we have a kinship. Please you are getting like me and that's bad. Happy one day, sad the next. My voice of gloom however thinks your writing is still excellent. Be happy, honey.
Marilyn, this is wonderful....hopin' your broken heart mends soon ;-) ~Trish~
Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on April 8, 2003
Excellent thoughts here! I hear you....Thanks, Dani
Reviewed by Sharon Williamson (Reader)
Reviewed on April 8, 2003
I enjoyed this very much
Sharon;)
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on April 8, 2003
Marylin,
"Professional tone -
it’s my investment
funny…
but the only return
I’m getting is a
Broken heart "
You dont even know how this one effected me
Morning sunshine Beautiful and painfulk explanations in verses
Peggy
From the author of Jupiter Remembered and Until It’s Time: Embracing Life In Our Later Years comes Petals of Love: Poetry of a Woman’s Soul – a heartfelt collection spanning more than thirty-five years. Through tender reflections, these poems offer g
Wow, I hope this is
only fiction...
Well written dear friend....
Hugs,
Trixie
So well said!!!
very well!!!
very interesting art too!!!
Jack
Excellent,
Reindeer
yf
tony
with today being no exception
josie
Sharon;)
"Professional tone -
it’s my investment
funny…
but the only return
I’m getting is a
Broken heart "
You dont even know how this one effected me
Morning sunshine Beautiful and painfulk explanations in verses
Peggy