Broken Hearts (poem) by Marilyn Seray on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on April 16, 2003

deeply moving write!

Reviewed on April 15, 2003

Marilyn,
I know this poem all too well! This one hits home, and hits it with a very real feeling!

Hugs,
Maria

P.S. I love your little Easter pick on your Bio! How cute is that!

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on April 14, 2003

Wow! the connection is errie isn't it? Great write!

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on April 14, 2003

Great message for someone you care a lot about. I hope the person gets this message.

Excellent write!

Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Marco Landi (Reader)

Reviewed on April 14, 2003

excellent work....marco

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on April 14, 2003

This was sad but lovely,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Jack Roberts

Reviewed on April 13, 2003

Such a sad write. Beautifully done Marilyn.
Jack

Reviewed by Melissa Rives

Reviewed on April 13, 2003

You always tug at the heart-strings...excellent!

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on April 13, 2003

You always get my attention...

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)

Reviewed on April 13, 2003

:(

Life does suck....sometimes....Wonderful emotive write....Ty, Dani

Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader)

Reviewed on April 13, 2003

the title says it all this was heartbreaking and sad and tearful nice jobon this poem

Reviewed by Kacie Rahm

Reviewed on April 13, 2003

exellent bravo! 3 cheers!

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on April 13, 2003

So sad and beautifully written marilyn
Chrissie

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on April 13, 2003

Marylin,
Especially when it is one you love and our close too.
Beautiful heartfelt piece.
Peggy

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on April 13, 2003

Excellent sad write, beauty of feelings within...

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on April 13, 2003

Pulls at the heart, so tender and loving.

Reviewed by Trixie Love

Reviewed on April 13, 2003

Hi Marilyn,
Like everyone already said..."This is sad
But written so beautiful."

Hugs,
Trixie

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on April 13, 2003

Sad and Beautiful!!

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on April 13, 2003

wonderful sad poem.

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on April 13, 2003

Sad, but well done, Marilyn. Bravo. Sometimes the most helpful thing is to walk away.

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)

Reviewed on April 13, 2003

Dear Marilyn, You do wonders with your pen.

Namaste

tony

Reviewed by jing javier

Reviewed on April 13, 2003

well done..

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on April 13, 2003

this is heartbreaking....sighhhhhhhh!!!
shit life sucks don't you think??

beautiful write thou

love
tinka

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on April 13, 2003

A SAD, WONDERFUL PIECE,
EXCELLENTLY WRITTEN

WILLIAM