I love this, Marilyn, it has the weight of a page of words!! I bet your preschoolers love you mightily! Your inner beauty and love of all Life shine! :)
"swelling in your immense yonder" .. Oh, Marilyn! Such a magnificent, gorgeous poem.. I'm glad I can type this because this piece has quite rendered me speechless! Poems have been written about what lies above us.. but none better than this. You've outdone yourself here. katy.
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on April 30, 2003
colors of the sky are amazing
love your write........
Reindeer
--Karissa
Chrissie
Beautiful mind, beautiful poem!
tony
Jack
Oh this is sooo
beautiful...
Hugs,
Trixie
love your write........
so full og imagery
William
this is so beautiful and imagery dreamy.
Peggy