Long Before (poem) by Marilyn Seray on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Ashraf Goreja (Reader)

Reviewed on November 16, 2003

Most beautiful poem. Nice write.

Greetings.

Goreja.com

Reviewed by Melissa Rives

Reviewed on November 6, 2003

And this is so divine!

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)

Reviewed on October 26, 2003

Pure beauty of words..Poetry as it should be..ty, Dani

Reviewed by Cynthia Borris

Reviewed on October 25, 2003

Excellent flow and very powerful!

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on October 25, 2003

Oh I did enjoy reading this one Marilyn...yes before...who really knows about before and after...lovely thoughts...floria

Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)

Reviewed on October 25, 2003

T'was before---sometimes I think it is all mapped out before we were even born :) This is beautiful work. I adore this. Excellent, it has such depth and says so much in few words.

Thank You,
Teresa Emilie

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on October 25, 2003

Short but powerful in meaning and emotion.

Reviewed by Digital Fairy

Reviewed on May 14, 2003

Oh my gosh this is SO beautiful! I am floored, virtually perfect in its romance...

--Karissa

Reviewed by Amor Sabor

Reviewed on May 13, 2003

Unparalled beauty in this romantic work. You constantly deliver.
Amor

Reviewed by Ed Lupinacci (Reader)

Reviewed on May 13, 2003

What a magic spell you have cast here
it is so soft, sweet and pleasing to every sense

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on May 13, 2003

I really like this, so I send the poetess a kiss, GEM

Reviewed by Birdie Houston (Reader)

Reviewed on May 12, 2003

Loved your poem it was penned and deeply expressed from your soul your a true poet !

Reviewed by Timothy writerwanted@hotmail.com

Reviewed on May 12, 2003

great ending to a great poem

God bless,
Tim

Reviewed by Timothy writerwanted@hotmail.com

Reviewed on May 12, 2003

Very deep Marilyn... beautiful!

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on May 12, 2003

Loved the ending! Great write.

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on May 12, 2003

Ah, Now this was perfectly beautiful, I loved
this one very much,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Kerry Compton Star Girl

Reviewed on May 12, 2003

Lovely.

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on May 12, 2003

Now this one is just fantastic.

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on May 12, 2003

5-12-03

NEAT__ as Long As You Don't Sell Your soul Before!

TRASK

Reviewed by Shadow Writer (Reader)

Reviewed on May 12, 2003

Smile, no matter how you say it, it sounds like forever.... this was exceptional.

Reviewed by Theresa Koch

Reviewed on May 12, 2003

Oh I loved this piece!!!!

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)

Reviewed on May 12, 2003

ooooo! This speaks to me.. sings to me.. it's unique, wildly imaginative.. Oh, how I love that picture.. when the page came up and I saw the pic I heard myself draw in a breath.. it was AFTER reading, though, that I realized that breath was finally escaping.. just lovely, sweet Marilyn.

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on May 12, 2003

Lovely, Marilyn. Short and sweet.

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*� (Reader)

Reviewed on May 12, 2003

So beautiful! ~Joseph

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on May 12, 2003

This heads my favourites of yours, Marilyn. This is truly beautiful.
Chrissie

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on May 12, 2003

outstanding write!!