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Half Awake
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Half awake, I am held in contempt as the gavel comes down to seal my fate Half awake, when all of my fears are strangling my tranquility I run to the border of reality Half awake, and reaching for you I’m smoldering as I cross over a threshold of wet electric branches Half awake, I pull myself out of a dream by calling out your name Half awake, I just know I’ve made it to reality by the feel of arms around me � Copyright MS

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Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on June 13, 2003

Outstanding. A very beatiful poem, Marilyn.
~Chrissie

Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster

Reviewed on June 13, 2003

Marilyn, this is a exceptionally beautiful, tender write. <smile> Enjoyed.
~Trish~

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*� (Reader)

Reviewed on June 13, 2003

Excellent piece of writing Marilyn!

~Joseph

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on June 13, 2003

Can feel the emotions, excellent work!

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on June 13, 2003

I love to read your poetry.

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on June 13, 2003

Like a dream just "Half Awake" The "feel of arms around me" embraced me with it's beauty. A wonderful write!

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on June 13, 2003

Marylin, well written. Being Half Awake is Half The Battle.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on June 12, 2003

We are all having very interesting dreams lately!!

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on June 12, 2003

Wonderful work, Marilyn.

Reviewed by Bianca Boonstra (Reader)

Reviewed on June 12, 2003

Beautiful write...

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on June 12, 2003

This is very very deep and powerful write...excellent...BHUWAN

Reviewed by Dana Matthews (Reader)

Reviewed on June 12, 2003

Very powerful second stanza! The whole verse is wonderful but the second stanza is beyond clever!

~DAM~

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)

Reviewed on June 12, 2003

Excellent, Marilyn!!

tony

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on June 12, 2003

Glad you woke on up
and found him in reality..
Great write....

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on June 12, 2003

lovely dreamy sequence of discovery~

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on June 12, 2003

Great write! Seems we are all having very interesting dreams.

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on June 12, 2003

Great love poem
Excellent write

William

Reviewed by The Gentle Man

Reviewed on June 12, 2003

that state of semi-consciousess can be terrifying....it's conforting to have a love one close by to feel your way back to reality.....smile Superbly written Marilyn!

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on June 12, 2003

Marylin,
Tender and beautiful.
"Half awake, I just
know I�ve made
it to reality by the
feel of arms around
me "
Peg

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