Giving Up (poem) by Marilyn Seray on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on December 31, 2003

NEVER NEVER NEVER QUIT

Reviewed by michael horetsky (Reader)

Reviewed on December 29, 2003

Wow...We can all dive deeply to find the last thread of happiness but it too consumes it seems. This is why we as humans must be ever strong..Caloused be damned..Turn the page and smile..michael

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on December 24, 2003

the emotions in this superb write just drip right off the page ...

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on December 23, 2003

Excellent write!!!!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on December 22, 2003

Powerful and heartfelt Marilyn!!

Happy Holidays tou my friend!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on December 22, 2003

May I say that this one grabbed onto me and wouldn't let go.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on December 21, 2003

Hearfelt expression that cuts to the quick for those who are there with you or have been there. Take care. Love and peace, Regis.

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on December 21, 2003

Hope it's just you writing not living
Have Happy Holidays Marilyn!

Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)

Reviewed on December 21, 2003

Marilyn, you write with a powerful and heartful pen.... thank you for sharing this piercing piece.... stay strong....
In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on December 21, 2003

Gorgeous poetry, heartfelt pain. I love you Sweet Friend and your poetry.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on December 21, 2003

Hope all is well with you, Marilyn! You are in my prayers! (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :( >tears <
Merry Christmas to you and yours!

Reviewed by Handsum Hart

Reviewed on December 21, 2003

Ouch ouch ouch, a gripping write

"i cannot fight this

anymore.

i wave a handkerchief -

Deep

Cold and

Red

from my bleeding heart"

VERY POWERFUL!!!!

peace

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on December 20, 2003

OH owie this is so sad and lonely beautiful verses and emotions Marylin and music perfection.

"the empty shell of my

heart is calloused

my spirit is restrained

i feel abandoned and

deprived

the last worn thread --

teasing and dangling

me over a pit of more misery

the thread breaks and

there i lie, in a pitiful

weeping heap. "
Peg

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on December 20, 2003

Oh Marilyn! This one is really down there...Please let it be just a great poem! I keep repeating the "all by myself " remake of this classic...such an ache to those words...You'll be in my thoughts and prayers...

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on December 20, 2003

Powerful emotional and profound
hope its only poetry

Happy Holidays
William

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on December 20, 2003

Hugs. I hope you okay? Powerful emotional write.