What You Do To Me (poem) by Marilyn Seray on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on August 12, 2004

well very well done....very erotic.........

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on May 9, 2004

So powerful, intensely passionate and beautiful.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on May 6, 2004

Wow! What a trip down ecstasy lane. Wonderful poem. Exciting.

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Reviewed on April 14, 2004

A delight to behold - marvelous write!

Reviewed by Melissa Rives

Reviewed on February 5, 2004

Sizzlin' hot Marilyn! Perfectly sensual and intense! Good to see your poetry again!

Reviewed by Vincent Martin (Reader)

Reviewed on February 1, 2004

...I enjoyed reading in woderious form what he does to you Marilyn (if I may be so fromal)...~DarkBard~

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on January 31, 2004

This was excellent!!! Loved every word here!

Reindeer

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on January 31, 2004

excellent loved this one

enjoyed mush

William

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on January 30, 2004

Invitingly metaphorical and sensual as well. Thank you, Marilyn. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on January 30, 2004

HELlo!

nice write, well done, marilyn! enjoyed~

(((HUGS))) and much love, your tx. friend, karen lynn. :D

Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)

Reviewed on January 30, 2004

EXCELLENT write!

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on January 30, 2004

very well done Marilyn...nicely written lines...floria

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on January 30, 2004

Oh my Marilyn, this is awesome! So well done.
~Chrissie :)

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on January 30, 2004

Flipping heck, feeling hot hot hot..

Reviewed by Sara Russell

Reviewed on January 30, 2004

Playful and sensual... I like the way this toys with the senses and the idea of lovers watching each other's faces...

Sara.

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on January 30, 2004

Wow!

Reviewed by Handsum Hart

Reviewed on January 29, 2004

This is super cool, I'd say you are one lucky woman.

Peace

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on January 29, 2004

Wonderful write....fantastic!!!!

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on January 29, 2004

Mercy me, your hotter than a Hot potato..
A most inviting write I must say..
x0x0x0x

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on January 29, 2004

Whoa! Marilyn,my monitor is aflame! This is so sensual it will melt the ice in N.Y's Rockafeller center!huwah!;-)

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on January 29, 2004

Wow!!

We are on the same planet Marilyn!!

My goodness this poem and my "Doors poem could be "One" very good "duet"

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on January 29, 2004

Very creative and well exucuted!