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Grieving Still
by SilverCeltic Moon → (All Poetry by SilverCeltic Moon)
  
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It's been a couple of years since you left.......


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I gather blossoms from the ground


and stand looking up into the face of the moon.


Somewhere in another place and time


I cheerfully sang another tune.


Tonight I am melancholy, sad and blue.


I am terribly missing you.


You left more than two years ago now.


I wasn't there to say goodbye to you.


I know the land you live in now


is magical and full of laughter.


Grief isn't for those who have passed


away....it is for those of us left after.


I miss your cheerful and happy voice.


You were so full of life and love.


It seemed I turned away for a moment


and you left and went above.


I smile when you visit me in my dreams.


You are so happy and full of cheer.


You smile at me and say you will see me later,


but we both know that it won't be soon or near.


I closed the door after you left.


I didn't watch to see you leave like I normally would.


I somehow knew in my dream you were gone


into the brightness of another world, as you should.


The warmth and peace of this dream lives within me still...


and yet my heart still aches for you so.


I have not come to terms with you leaving


and still ask why you had to go.


Someday I will be able to let go.


I know that time will take the sharpness of pain away.


Until then, I hold on to this thought...


and wait for the promised  'some day'.


 


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 Reviews of "Grieving Still"
Reviewed by Lois Christensen
Reviewed on May 11, 2008
It's alright to grieve and to take all the time you need. When he comes to you in a dream, it is so nice but to wake up and find it isn't true is not much fun. Anyway they are with their creator and much better off than we are here. We stuggle on with our fears.

Reviewed by ***** ********* (Reader)
Reviewed on August 26, 2003
A lyrically interesting and arresting description of grief and of "survivor's guilt", Silver! The sad ache behind these words is real enough to touch! To an artist, emotional pain is all too often inspiration for transcendent work...! Bravo!

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on August 23, 2003
Perfection.....profound write!!!!

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on August 22, 2003
perfected sadness... great write...

Reviewed on August 22, 2003
(((((HUGS)))))

the pain never really goes away...but it does ease after a time

you're in my thoughts and prayers

((((HUGS)))) and love,

karla. *tears*

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Reviewed on August 22, 2003
Such moving, haunting sorrow in this excellantly written piece. I loved how it just flowed and flowed sort of like my tears here!
((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~

Reviewed on August 22, 2003
Very moving, lovely piece. Very common for the bereaved to dream of their lost loved ones. Nicely worded.

Julie :)

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on August 22, 2003
Oh Silver this moved me...tomorrow my mom will gone 16 years...and I still miss her...and with my little girl....it took me four years to except the fact that she was never coming back....I almost packed up...but I made it...but the pain is still there...and now my sorrow and pain of losing another...I just can't bear it!!

Thanks for your kindness and your reviews!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed on August 22, 2003
>tears < :( ((((HUGS)))) and love, your friend in texas, karen lynn.

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on August 22, 2003
Silver,,,I am just boohooing here. Great heartfelt write. ~SH~

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
Reviewed on August 22, 2003
Beautifully and emotional poem! Well done, Silver.

Reviewed by Ashraf Goreja (Reader)
Reviewed on August 22, 2003
A beautiful poem.

Greetings from Atlanta.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on August 22, 2003
A sad tribute that has been well done.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on August 22, 2003
Hauntingly beautiful.

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on August 22, 2003
Silver, your poem is beautiful and reminds me of my father and sister. How I wish I would have had more time to spend with them. They are gone but we will never forget them.

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)
Reviewed on August 21, 2003
Hi, A sad loving tribute. Written so eloquently. I am sorry for your loss.


tony

Reviewed by SilverCeltic Moon
Reviewed on August 21, 2003
Thank you Lady Peg. I still cry when I think of my sister not being around to chat with...and I miss her so. Silver


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