If... (poem) by Sheri C. Uy on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by C. Borris (Reader)

Reviewed on March 3, 2010

"If" two letters but you have written a beautiful poem filled with such longing to belong... beautiful, She. Best regards to you and family.

Reviewed by David Clure

Reviewed on February 25, 2010

in my opinion, this is poetry at its best.
Very open expression of your heart...refreshing in a world
where honesty is too often discouraged.
Questions that long for answers, and and "if" that
is hopeful and encouraging

~Z.B.McClure

Reviewed by Gerald Tate

Reviewed on February 16, 2010

I'd say, "Hang on and I'll be over on the next flight, ha ha.

Gerry

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila

Reviewed on August 24, 2009

Beautiful! If...indeed. Lovely flow to your very thought-provoking words.

Anna

Reviewed by E. Richardson (Reader)

Reviewed on January 29, 2008

Profoundly expressed longings...with underlying passion.

Reviewed by M. Rafferty (Reader)

Reviewed on January 29, 2008

Makes me want to be everything for you in this poem, Sheri. Simple yet deep and meaningful.

Matt

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green

Reviewed on January 26, 2008

Very touching. . .makes me want to see more. Write on!! <3'Pea' <3

Reviewed by Theresa Koch

Reviewed on January 25, 2008

Lovely sonnet~`*

Reviewed by Cryssa C

Reviewed on January 22, 2008

A longing...poignantly expressed.
Beautiful!
Cryssa

Reviewed by Jerry Engler

Reviewed on January 19, 2008

Outstanding and well-done writing to the core of passion and longing, Sheri. The perspective is very unique...Jerry

Reviewed by Morning Star

Reviewed on January 18, 2008

Beautifully written and expressed fee;lings
A sad painful heartfelt write!
Outstanding Write!!
Peace Love and hugssss to you....Morning Star

Reviewed by Amor Sabor

Reviewed on January 16, 2008

Very passionate write. Well done.

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on January 14, 2008

If, two letters, but a big word...

Reviewed by Staci Gansky-Wagner

Reviewed on January 14, 2008

Oh I love this poem, it is filled with passion and wanting. A reflection of "if" things were different. A lovely and inner-healing write.

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on January 14, 2008

Very touching Sheri, "If" we only knew. Thank you for sharing your feelings.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on January 14, 2008

If I could all the poem is asking, you wouldn't have been sad, nor I would have been alone, but just only if.......
Georg

Reviewed by John Leko

Reviewed on January 14, 2008

...pen of asking...if perhaps in wishing...one hopes...then hope within this write...will heal.
nicely written Sheri...
John

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on January 13, 2008

Beautiful write Sherri thank you for sharing this beautiful piece of poetry
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on January 13, 2008

Yes, that word if, can be such a lonely word! Beautiful poem Sheri!

Love,
ET

Reviewed by Marigold Johnson (Reader)

Reviewed on January 13, 2008

Sheri, with God, there are no 'ifs', just loving arms waiting to enfold and heal... no questions asked. Let those thoughts ramble, but let God rule!

In Christ,
MNJ

Reviewed by Regino Gonzales, Jr.

Reviewed on January 13, 2008

I can feel the pain and yearnings of the one who truly loves. May the hands of God reach and touch her.

Regino

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on January 13, 2008

This is very engaging, Sheri; and I can relate to the feelings that you express via your verses. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on January 13, 2008

Oh Sheri, in time of strife and lonliness one reaches for the hands of God to help lift them up and walk into the light, well done...

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on January 13, 2008

Sheri, Such inner thoughts,, good question If? Are there times we never let one know what our thoughts are??? If so,, we may never know,,, Excellent Write
Love, Christine

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on January 13, 2008

The simplicity of this write is in it's beauty that reaches out and makes the reader feel you are talking and asking them personally for their love...very nice and very well done with no waste of precious words.

Fee

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on January 13, 2008

a beautifully written piece
of serene longing
Loved it
Peace be with you

William

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on January 13, 2008

Wonderful display of emotive excellence, Sheri; well penned! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on January 13, 2008

If you could see through my thoughts
And find that your image dwells within
I love the twist on your poem
Hugs
Ron

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on January 13, 2008

One never knows until they reach out and try. Beautifully, poignantly expressed inquisitivity...well done, Sheri.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.