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If They Could Speak Back About the Sabotage in Iraq
by J. W. Murphy → (All Poetry by J. W. Murphy)
  
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*Aug. 20, 2003.
I have figured out how to get spacing to go through--I apologize for the last two poems with the periods for spacing. I will correct them if anyone wants to go back and read them without the periods.
As for this poem, it is a departure from the usual for me and I assure you that I use what would be termed profanity for a reason--psychology and anger being key here.

If the soldiers in Iraq
                         could speak back
            to tell us what they think
                         of it all
            I think their very anger
                         would shake us--
Conveying to us how the sabotage
                         of all their efforts
            to restore the country's necessities
                         power and water
            to help a liberated people
                         move on and through
Living without power and water--depravity's collage


Perhaps they would say
                                              something like this:


             I'm tired of those f-ing assholes--
             those fanatical bastards
             screwing their own people
             because they don't like us.
             What f-ing assholes
             would screw their own people
             out of water and electricity
             just because they hate us
             and want to make a point?


             How could anyone
             in their right mind
             be such f-ing assholes?
             What the f***!
             Here we are helping them
             and they screw us
             and their people--
             regardless of how we got here,
             we came here to help
             and yet these people don't care
             or are so jaded by the cause
             that they would dare
             screw everyone to make a point.
             I'm so f-ing sick of it!


Does the sabotage bother us?
                         those that are here
            when we read it in papers
                         all the fights
            when innocents are killed
                         for cowards' causes
Do we think about the soldiers' reactions?
                         that can't speak
             to tell us what they think
                         of it all
             has the thought of it
                         shaken you?
The destroying of the thing that they are doing
                         is a hard one
              to restore a country's necessities
                         power and water
              to have a fanatical group
                         sabotage it all


              I wouldn't dream
              of saying what I think
              of those idiots over there,
              who are so stupid
              as to deprive their own people
              in the name of the cause.
              But, I'll tell the possible voice
              of the soldiers there
              to speak for me--
              for what I would say
              if I expressed
              my inner anger.


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Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on August 24, 2003
J., Yes I'm sure that your written thoughts are probably running real close to what they are thinking and we are thinking as well. Yes, they do really hate us. Just like Shaw has brought to light, but then we aren't completely fond of them either. Nine-Eleven made most of us aware of just how hated we truly are throughout the Middle East, but we have something they will never understand, and that reason would be that they do not have the humanitarian ability to put oneself aside to better their own living conditions much less for their neighbor. We have pride in Country and Unity in numbers. We won't give up, we won't back down and we will move past anything they can dish out. They woke this sleeping giant, now they can deal with us. And I personally don't think they have the ability to sing us back to sleep. They try and divide us by planting seeds of unrest in the camp, and then standing back and watching them grow into nasty civil and personal wars. Until the people stop and realize what it is that they are doing, it will continue.
They turn friends against friends, family against family. They smile and tell you what a friend they are and when you turn your back they have you.
I'm sure our Soldiers would rather be holding their spouses and playing football with their kids than being over their with terrorists and madmen picking them off one by one, so they can be considered martyrs. What a twisted definition of a hero! Anybody in their right mind has to question the mentality of a group such as that.
Sorry if I rambled. Great write. ~SH~

Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington (Reader)
Reviewed on August 24, 2003
You have shown us a maddness in this world that doesn't make sense. Gives one much to think about.

~Jackie~

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on August 24, 2003
You said it all and made your point, and it's right on target! Yes I'm sick of it too! You speak for many of us!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on August 24, 2003
Powerful thouhgt to test!!

love Tinka

Reviewed by Zenith Elliott
Reviewed on August 24, 2003
More please...excellent thought to test ! ~ZZ~


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