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Distorted Vision - Part Two - Hyperopia
by Scott Allan Tacke → (All Poetry by Scott Allan Tacke)
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A Poem In Three Prescriptions

Hyperopia

 

In science class, she argued that the scientists were wrong, And baffled us with her convictions shouted loud and strong.

I saw she was convinced that everything she said was right, Because the Bible told her so and she had seen the Light.

"How can you act so sure," I asked, "with such blind certainty?"
"I have my faith," she smiled, "and that is fact enough for me."

"That's fine," I argued, "but I'd be more cautious with my trust."
"The Lord God is all-knowing and my blind faith is a must.

"You place your trust in earthly things, I place mine up above.
"And everything He does for us, He does so out of love.

"He's the shepherd, I'm the lamb; His children are His pride,
And none can cast asunder those with God's might at their side."

I heard years later, she was stalked, and no doubt paused to pray.
I don't know if she finished, but he raped her anyway.

Her friends and family all joined hands in prayer as each one cried;
Entreating tears implored the Lord, but nonetheless — she died.

I think about her often, for she's steeped in irony:
What's close at hand we do not need a telescope to see.
 
 


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 Reviews of "Distorted Vision - Part Two - Hyperopia"
Reviewed by Andrea Williams
Reviewed on January 11, 2008
Faith is a strangely powerful emotion. What happened to this lady in reality or myth is indeed tragic. The christians who were thrown to the Lions were indeed faithful to the end. Jesus Christ historically suffered on the cross. I do not know the reason for all this pain. My brother lies critical on life support, paralysed from the neck down. he was already born partially blind and is the nicest man you could meet. Yet i pray. what else can I do? Science hasn't found a cure for C2-C4 acute spinal injury.

Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on January 11, 2008
You caught me off guard with this part, Scott. My "Distorted Vision" was expecting more humor after reading part one. I'm impressed when an author can take me unawares. Certainly a different message here. I find myself asking the age-old question - why do bad things have to happen to good people? Very dramatic and perfectly rhymed!
Sheila

Reviewed by Chanti Niven
Reviewed on January 11, 2008
...and on the other end of the scale. You do know how to drive a point home effectively Scott. In the first you employed humour and in this, tragedy. An interesting in'sight.
Chanti


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