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Creative Writing 101
by Eileen Clemens Granfors → (All Poetry by Eileen Clemens Granfors)
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This poem reflects a class I took. I like being called AD's resident Tinkerbell! This is for my classmates. We made a great team!


Poem Artwork

Words kiss the paper with tenderness

The whiteness dimples with ciphers and script.

She tests a word change, a new phrase, scratches out lines,

Begins again.  The process pleases her.

The professor's red pen matches his rum-ruddy face,

He shakes his head, then the paper, like a terrier,

As if his rough treatment will make her pretty words

Slide off, cringe and hide, slink away.

"Where's the stark reality? the sex and violence?

The language of the streets?

Do you live in Fairy Land?  Are you Tinkerbell?"

He believes he knows best what the world wants,

He is afterall, Mr. Hollywood.

He ignores the greed that buries his intuition,

And will not tune in to hers,

for love and joy and beauty,

For what matters to her heart on this day.

 

 


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 Reviews of "Creative Writing 101"
Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on July 31, 2010
At least he didn't make you write vampire stories. p

Reviewed by J'nia Fowler
Reviewed on July 30, 2010
Great insight and a bit of humor as well. I enjoy your perspective. Now a days profs want guts and gore on the page rather than reason and rhyme. Good on ya. J'nia

Reviewed by pat medlin
Reviewed on July 29, 2010
i find structured groups to be most inhibiting to forms of expression...one spends more time analyzing than verbalizing....i loved your way of saying this....besides i like looking at the world through tinkerbell glasses....dump the class and the rum pickled teaccher...wine gives a shine

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on July 29, 2010
Love it, for in poetry how can we be limited to structured words of what is wanted by the crowd over what is art...you go Tinkerbell.
Peter

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on July 29, 2010
Thats it, write what you feel or want to write, the hell with teachers with "rum-ruddy" looks...;-)

Reviewed on July 29, 2010
Eileen,

Beautifully written. I can identify, I'm taking a class too, not in poetry, but mostly fiction short stories. I've written over 100 poems, just to find out, I'm no poet. LOL.

Mary

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on July 29, 2010
So very true, Eileen. This so reminds me of my universtity days. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Dayvid Graybill
Reviewed on July 29, 2010
Very cool! I found myself in the classroom with you. Keep writing the beauty of your heart Eileen.

Peace,
Dayvid


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