I'm not sure if this is good enough to post, most of you know I usually write in rhyme as it seems to come so natural to me, but here goes nothing...a free verse. Go ahead and tell me if it isn't any good. :)
Can you bend your mind
around the notion
that sometimes madness
is a merely a slight twist of reason?
When silence echoes
behind the eyes
for far too long…
or lingers in the shadows of the soul
indefinitely.
When darkness reaches up
through the cracks in the floorboard,
bleeding into the room without windows…
the heart is painted in shades of
misery and destruction.
Can you taste the winds
of freedom,
while shackled in the cell of solitude?
Groping, scratching for something
you know you’ll never find.
Who else is there
when you’re alone?
When fear grips your throat
and panic tries to scream its way
out of your lungs?
Perhaps the shadow is all anyone
ever really sees of the chaos
that started the shifting thoughts
within your mind.
Though no one else can ever truly know
what keeps you awake at night,
while slithering it’s way into your daydreams.
So, who can say
what is your sickness?
Your madness, your curse?
Perhaps one day it will become defined,
more clearly outlined.
Could merely be a talent,
hiding… waiting… expanding…
yearning for its release.
Melissa,
Your writing is a gift! Never doubt your abilities to touch anothers soul through your words. It is what helps to move us through the madness, that leads to creativity!
... my dear girl, although your rhymed poetry is lovely, and wonderfully crafted, it can be a prison; i applaud your courage to break free. this is wonderful!!! *aamie stands up and claps her hands*
You know Melissa, you can do no wrong in my eyes. Though no one can match you and Dani (the twins in rhyme and meter ;-)this is also brilliant, I love the finale...bravo!
Intensely powerful words and even more so without the limitations rhyming sometimes is apt to do...unless a few like yourself do it...for you can do anything without fear of doing it perfectly.
Amor
Melissa, no matter what you write, it's good to me. this is fantastic!
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on March 1, 2003
Girl you got to be kidding, asking us that..You are good...yep I am a rhymer too..I even think in rhyhme..talk in rhyme but free style I love also..and you did this so well..love the sentiments in here especially this verse...
"Who else is there
when you’re alone?
When fear grips your throat
and panic tries to scream its way
out of your lungs? "
Wow....powerful...love it..floria
Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on March 1, 2003
Melissa, this is brilliant wonderful. My mind raced along with it understand every thought as I went. So good! Do it some
more. Your friend always. Bill
This book operationalizes the profound teachings of the Enneagram so that coaches and other growth-oriented professionals can use specific processes,tools and strategies to empower and support the transformation of their clients.
Your writing is a gift! Never doubt your abilities to touch anothers soul through your words. It is what helps to move us through the madness, that leads to creativity!
I love this!
Hugs,
Maria
Chrissie
~E
Amor
"Who else is there
when you’re alone?
When fear grips your throat
and panic tries to scream its way
out of your lungs? "
Wow....powerful...love it..floria
more. Your friend always. Bill