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Payback
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Give'em enough rope...they'll hang themselves!

It’s coming around again
spiraling down
in the hate that you breed
you will choke ‘till you drown.

Like a cancerous cell
it will spread through your brain
feeding on your infection
‘till you feel the pain.

For the torture you’ve given
while spitting out lies
comes the knife blade to you
no one hearing your cries.

Run away if you can
it will tangle your feet
mangle you in the madness
you’ll find no retreat.

For the moment approaches
when push comes to shove
you will find no redemption
from heaven above.

Where the cost is too heavy
your anger too deep
should have sown seeds of love
now it’s hell that you reap.

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 Reviews of "Payback"
Reviewed by Tiffany Connelly (Reader)
Reviewed on May 1, 2003
And once again Melissa delivers a flawless ' in ya face ' approach to a well known comfort we call payback .

Reviewed by Birdie Houston (Reader)
Reviewed on May 1, 2003
Great poem!

Reviewed by Ronald Dondiego
Reviewed on April 30, 2003
I can see why everyone loves your poetry - so dark and excellent - with an absolute riveting ending verse. Thankyou, Ron

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on April 30, 2003
So true Melissa....Your poetry is brilliant....Your pen adores you...;)

Thanks, Dani

Reviewed by Marco Landi (Reader)
Reviewed on April 30, 2003
Even with anger soo deep
you find powerful fluidity is your strong statement well done.

Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci
Reviewed on April 30, 2003
Melissa,
I am with Dana, this rocks! Huge, huge smile from reading this!

Hugs,
Maria

Reviewed by Malachy MacFarlane (Reader)
Reviewed on April 30, 2003
You have the pace of this just spot on for the content; fast an edgy! As usual a wonderful write. Mal.

Reviewed by J John (Reader)
Reviewed on April 30, 2003
Words of wisdom J & J

Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on April 30, 2003
Melissa, breautiful. Rock em Sock em Lady.
Some need to hav their toes tromped on. Bill

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on April 29, 2003
most excellent!

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on April 29, 2003
You nailed this one Melissa! Beautifully crafted!Your word usage is the best!

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on April 29, 2003
How can they ever expect love when
all they spit out is hate?
Excellent write!

Reviewed by James David Compton (Reader)
Reviewed on April 29, 2003
Absolutely, what goes around, comes around.
Nicely put.

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on April 29, 2003
Melissa, wow this is powerful
"Where the cost is too heavy
your anger too deep
should have sown seeds of love
now it’s hell that you reap. "
Peggy

Reviewed by Aamie Burnley
Reviewed on April 29, 2003
... nice work. i like the 'last word' feel to this.


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