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Melissa C. Rives

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Win Or Lose
by Melissa C. Rives → (All Poetry by Melissa C. Rives)
  
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Though her lot be cast in sorrow
circumstance can’t pale…
The dreams she holds within her heart
to which her wings set sail.

Through hardships she has cursed the day
yet never blamed the night…
‘Tis shadows cooling comfort
that has blessed her soul with fight.

The strength to stand within the winds
that bend her ‘neath their force…
Has only come from trying times
in which she stayed the course.

When no one saw the pain she bore
alone she faced her fears…
She ran the race with diligence
while swallowing her tears.

From past mistakes comes wisdom’s voice
to spare us from the same…
It’s not enough to hope for change
it’s how you play the game.

She’s found that life is bittersweet
yet worth it’s every mile…
It’s how you view the good and bad
that makes it all worthwhile.




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 Reviews of "Win Or Lose"
Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on May 7, 2003
very nice

Reviewed by ShyPoet 1
Reviewed on May 5, 2003
I know you have tried different forms of poetry, which i think is absolutely great, but i like it so much when you write like this! Plus its very wise advice! Well done.

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on May 4, 2003
Yes Mamm, great advice here..
You are the goddess of verse

Reviewed by Christine Morell
Reviewed on May 4, 2003
Excellent and written perfectly.
Chrissie

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Reviewed on May 4, 2003
Melissa outstanding ryhme and rythm...what excellance!
~Nikki~

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
Reviewed on May 4, 2003
What a wonderful write, and full of truth

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on May 4, 2003
AMEN

Reviewed by J. Murphy
Reviewed on May 4, 2003
As all others have said, great rhythm and rhyme on this. Wonderful point as well. J.

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on May 4, 2003
excellent write melissa

William

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on May 4, 2003
excellent rhyme and meter! wise message...

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on May 3, 2003
I agree with E.;-) you and Dani still rule in rhyme and rhythm;-)

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on May 3, 2003
I love your verse. You never disappoint.


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