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Silent Victory
by Melissa C. Rives → (All Poetry by Melissa C. Rives)
  
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To loose the tongue would be to rage
against the wrongs been done…
Yet silence is the blade that cuts
through which your fears shall run.

You’ve woven lies as smooth as silk
yet it’s the worm I see…
While deep within my wings emerge
till I, at last am free.

I hover only out of reach
that you may never find…
This soul that’s bled the past to shed
your memory from my mind.

Now on the winds I sail with ease
for certainly I’ve gained…
Perspective from the pain I bore
with wounds the heart sustained.

I’ve no time now for looking back
what’s done is dead and gone…
It’s useless to relive the past
so I’m just moving on.

No, I’ll not rage against your sins
for I have learned to cope…
I’ll just sit back and watch you hang
yourself with your own rope.


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 Reviews of "Silent Victory"
Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on October 6, 2003
as always, excellent

Reviewed by Robert Montesino
Reviewed on June 20, 2003
Found this little gem quite by accident today, what a pleasant surprise! Your prose are profoundly enlightening and each line powerfully well crafted! Looking forward to reading more from you!

Reviewed on June 20, 2003
This was so excellent, I loved it!

Reindeer

Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)
Reviewed on June 19, 2003

I love your words. MY! (sigh)

Thank you,

Teresa

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
Reviewed on June 19, 2003
Outstanding work Melissa

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on June 19, 2003
Great write with a perfect ending.

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on June 19, 2003
Superb rhyme and meter ... bravo Melissa!

~Joseph

Reviewed by Christine Morell
Reviewed on June 19, 2003
Each line is an absolute gem. The rhyme and flow is perfect, as always.
~Chrissie

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on June 19, 2003
Melissa, awesome. The true meaning of, If you give em enough rope they'll hang themselves. Love the outstanding rhyme and flow of your poetry.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on June 19, 2003
Powerful write! Perfection in rhyme and flow.

Reviewed on June 19, 2003
A wonderful write....this is a true beauty in every sense...wise decision as well :) ~Trish~

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on June 19, 2003
Melissa,
Powerful verses and done in excellence.
Peggy

Reviewed by Amor Sabor
Reviewed on June 19, 2003
This write would have been a silent victory had it not shouted out its meaning loud and clear. It is so well crafted in every line which leads to the next. Beautiful work, Melissa.
Amor

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on June 19, 2003
"...You’ve woven lies as smooth as silk
yet it’s the worm I see…
While deep within my wings emerge
till I, at last am free...."

Wonderful lines...each a gem.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on June 18, 2003
Bravo!! Wish I wrote this!!

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on June 18, 2003
Every line is potent!An exceptional write! Finale to cheer for;-)!!!


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