It is a great write, nice flow and easy to read. Thanks for sharing this piece with us. One Love
Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on September 2, 2003
Caught this one right as it was about to fall off the page…Extremely passionately written Your love of words is evident in all you pen Melissa…You are amongst the finest I've read. thank you…Dani
Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington (Reader)
Reviewed on September 2, 2003
Oh...these are words placed in perfection. A marvelous write indeed!
OUTSTANDING POETRY! Everything you say here is like a blood curdling scream. Your work is excellent and rips at the the things we fear as humans. EXCELLENT EXCELLENT WORK! I enjoyed reading these verses. My mind was filled with all sorts of images!
most excellent! :D (((HUGS))) to you and the kiddos...love, your texas friend, karen lynn. :D
Reviewed by Marco Landi (Reader)
Reviewed on September 2, 2003
Drawn from heaven, cursed of hell
thy will be thine alone…
For no man has the power to sway
each choice is ours to own.
Wonderful start great poem brava Marco
~Jackie~
Amor
enjoyable poetry
William
Thank you,
Emilie
Reindeer
Drawn from heaven, cursed of hell
thy will be thine alone…
For no man has the power to sway
each choice is ours to own.
Wonderful start great poem brava Marco
~Joseph
Make them, own them, and live with them.
Love Tinka
Stay inspired!
Tami
~Chrissie
Best regards,
Leland