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Cold Heart
by Melissa C. Rives → (All Poetry by Melissa C. Rives)
  
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In it comes like an icicle to the heart,
a moment when the air is crushed from the lungs
until reason is left shivering without a blanket.
Cold winter wind shifts through veins
turning the blood into muddy slush.

Cryptic thoughts murmering in vague voices
breathing frost upon the soul, begin to spread
their patterns upon the windows looking out…
while popsicle fingers grab your throat.

Confusion setting in as eyes glaze over
like an old mirror, or
the blinding light of winter’s white.

With every heart-beat comes the sound
of breaking glass or avalanche,
wherein the spirit must prevail
or shatter and become
the sound of fear.

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 Reviews of "Cold Heart"
Reviewed by L. Figgins
Reviewed on February 27, 2005
Powerful and chilling analogies!

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
Reviewed on December 18, 2003
Wow, a great poem Melissa, outstanding imagery

Reviewed by Ashraf Goreja (Reader)
Reviewed on December 18, 2003
Quite nice. Well expressed.

Greetings.

Goreja.com

Reviewed by Samuel Stone
Reviewed on December 7, 2003
Very well written full of emotion, delivered with style and eligance, Respectfully, Sam

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on December 7, 2003
very nice

thought i was tracking you, but discovered not, so have clicked and i'll not miss others

enjoy your work

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on December 6, 2003
You effectively convey the feelings intended. Brrr! Makes me shiver. Very well done. Love and peace, Regis.

Reviewed by Amor Sabor
Reviewed on December 6, 2003
Melissa, you write so beautifully and the metaphoric sense of this poem is awesome and impressive. The Creator has indeed blessed you with the gift.
Amor

Reviewed by Aamie Burnley
Reviewed on December 4, 2003
... you write enviably well.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on December 4, 2003
the imagery in this poem, slices through the soul ... well done!

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on December 3, 2003
AN EXCELLENT PIECE MELISSA
ENJOY READING MUCH

WILLIAM

Reviewed by Transcendental Poet (Reader)
Reviewed on December 2, 2003
WOW this is COLD and well delivered!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on December 2, 2003
Very well written piece Melissa!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed on December 2, 2003
yikes! chilling write; the lines "white popsicle fingers grab your throat" really got to me. excellent imagery; well done! (((HUGS))) to you and your lovely family this holiday season...happy holidays to each and every one of you! love, your texas friend, karen lynn. :D

Reviewed by Tami Ryan
Reviewed on December 2, 2003
Brrrrrrrrr...! What powerful message here. Love this line:
"while popsicle fingers grab your throat" Superb write!
Excellent work, Melissa.

Hugs,
Tami

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on December 2, 2003
Melissa. HI how are you? Your imagery in this poem is so fabulous.
what beautiful verses you have penned. You just get better with time. floria

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on December 1, 2003
Melissa, sangfroid! Exquisite poetry right off the tundra!
Happy Holidays to you and yours!

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on December 1, 2003
Wow, this is about as cold hearted as it gets
Excellent images
I've got to put some gloves on now...

Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)
Reviewed on December 1, 2003
"while popsicle fingers grab your throat."---wow!

This will be a classic. Your images are always gripping. Fine fine work.

Thanks,
Emilie


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