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Reunion
by Carol Culver Rzadkiewicz → (All Poetry by Carol Culver Rzadkiewicz)
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Reunion

Funny,


I’ve never noticed the way you sleep


With your mouth open and snore,


Until now,


Or the way the covers rise and fall


As your eyelids flicker


At visions of worlds I’ll never see


 


I feel alienated


Here, in the gray hours before dawn,


Watching you and listening


To the silence, punctuated by your breath,


And knowing


Though we often come so close


We are one,


We are still separate,


Each alone within ourselves.


 


And so I wait


For the sun to rise


And your eyes to open,


Blinking at the day,


And hope you’ll gradually turn and smile


As though you had never been away.


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 Reviews of "Reunion"
Reviewed by Kathy Kopp
Reviewed on February 28, 2008
Carol. I enjoyed this poem for the powerful impact it had on me, in a quiet, soothing manner. I like your indentations, they work! The rhymes are effective by being scattered throughout. You're a very excellent lyrical poet, indeed! The message I got was reassuring, that even though partners do part when sleeping, they wake up together again.

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on February 20, 2008
Thoughts before the breaking of a new day as two souls slowly rise becoming one again, just lovely....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed on February 20, 2008
Carol, this is lovely! Very nice!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed on February 20, 2008

Inspiring and enchanting words in "Reunion" stimulate romance and togetherness.

Keep posting, Poet.

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on February 20, 2008
Carol,

Yes, my friend we are all individuals with our own idiosyncracies. Loving each other for whom we are and not for what we do is all part of the big picture. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.

Reviewed on February 20, 2008
Carol,

This is beautiful, with memorable lines - particularly loved,

" ... I feel alienated
Here, in the gray hours before dawn ...." (and you say you're not a Poet LOL)

Well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.


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