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The Color of Forgiveness
by Cryssa C → (All Poetry by Cryssa C)
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The Color of Forgiveness

The blazing anger flowed
Red Hot
Igniting bitterness within.

The acrimony and the hurt
I felt
brought darkness to my soul.

And in that moonless midnight hour
the wind
spewed sparks into the sky
and fanned the fire hotter.

In that eager orange light
the taunting flames licked round me--
Searing me and scalding me
and laughing at my plight.

But in the stillness of that night
the Firelight
burned clarity and insight to my mind.

The cruel truth I realized:
The blaze
had power to destroy me.

And so I searched for tools
to fight the huge inferno;
but each time I tried to squelch the flames,
It seemed my foe burned sharper.

Time wore on,
and gradually
the Flames reduced to embers,
Glowing faintly ‘midst the new dawn’s light…

I thought the fight was finished.
Relieved,
I looked upon the scene…

And there my eyes beheld
Charcoal--
The battle’s only remnant.

Rains came then,
Releasing angry, hurt filled torrents,
Drenching the battered field
And cleansing the blackened muddle

Gradually, the rain reduced,
Softening…
the colors of my anger
to a gentle mizzle of remorse

Time moved on and with it,
where once had lain
a charred and empty wasteland,
new growth emerged--

And with it,
the colors of my anger melted,
slowly draining into the growth-
Creating a garden of rich-hued grass and flowers

Looking up,
the Son
burned White Light into my soul,

And I basked--
In the warmth and peace
of the perfect color of forgiveness.

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Reviewed by John Coppolella
Reviewed on February 7, 2009
I think the mizzle of the muddle, is a great description of the way I feel sometimes, if I can be forgiven for paraphrasing your verses.

I like how you brought it all home in the end. Nice touches. A brave write. Thanks for sharing.

rockie

Reviewed by 000 000 (Reader)
Reviewed on January 2, 2009
I never thought of feelings in colors. A tremendously imaginative writing...and versed so well.

Reviewed by Mary Coe
Reviewed on March 19, 2008
A beautiful write. Very enjoyable reading.

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh
Reviewed on March 11, 2008
Very beautifully written, you are a gift to the Den!

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on February 15, 2008
Wonderful metaphors here, Cyrssa. Forgiveness brings lightness of thought and also to the heart. Well written.

Reviewed by Leo Durrant
Reviewed on February 2, 2008
I love the metaphors here. We can take it on so may levels. The lesson I loved the most was this:
"Creating a garden of rich-hued grass and flowers"
We often think that it would be better to not start the fire. If we didn't have to go through the things that made us so angry in the first place, we would be much happier. But that is never the case. We need that fire to burn out the old growth to make way for that rich-hued grass and the wonderful gardens. So let the fire come. We just need to make sure we quench it before it destroys us completely.
Great write. Spoken with much wisdom and feeling. I hope you're enjoying the Son-shine in your gardens.
Much love,
Leo

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on January 19, 2008
And I basked--
In the warmth and peace
of the perfect color of forgiveness.

Lovely and healing sentiments, Cryssa. Thank you for sharing them. Welcome to AD. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on January 19, 2008
I cannot be more in agreement with all of my peers below to open my welcoming arms to our community of writers and painters.
Your poem have that quality only inspirational ones are written with a heart that felt pain but that conquered the desire to retribution and, as you said, basked in peace under the sun of forgiveness.
Georg

Reviewed by Emile Tubiana
Reviewed on January 18, 2008
Dear Cryssa, first of all, I welcome you in our AuthorsDen. As you can see, I am a grandpa who grew up among ten children. We still love each other dearly. We lost three of us; we are now seven. My wife and I just came home from a 160 miles trip, to be with my children and my grandchildren. We had dinner together then everyone left in another direction.

I had the pleasure of reading your bio and your poem: "The Color of Forgiveness". You described real feelings of a human being. Let’s say it simply, our head is a computer and our body has multiple chords, each one of which has an array of feelings showing us the good and in the wrong path. It is up to us to choose. The moment we choose the good path, we feel relieved. You described both of them and I am pleased to recognize you for that. Looking forward to read you again. Keep going, we are with you, with love and sincerity. God bless you, Emile

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on January 18, 2008
How well you describe a bitter feeling for someone and how forgiveness gives the peace of mind to you that was not there before. Welcome aboard. Time does soften a hurt.

Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten
Reviewed on January 18, 2008
I love the style, the creativity and your woven words toward THE ultimate lesson...Forgiveness. It is the only place to bask!
Welcome to AD, you and I have alot in common, I'm sure!
13 kids! Ya got me beat by two! :)(Unless your talking goats! LOL!)
Nice to meet you!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
I wrote a poem, "O' Scintillations" Check it out sometime, Uou and I saw the same SON!


Reviewed by Donald Beaulieu
Reviewed on January 18, 2008
Hellish metaphor of the power of Satin to taunt and agonize us as the power of "The Light" absolves us and anoints our spirit into peacefulness and then sends off on a new journey. Beautiful metaphor of Christ power over evil and His willingness to easy our misery (often self created) and allow us learn and become wiser. Beautiful reflection! In "The Light," Dream Weaver

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on January 18, 2008
You write of upheaval, its anguish and potential for destruction, the hope and the light with such clarity. You definitely have my attention. It would appear that I saved the best for last [having read your other two poems first.] Your poetic heart is beautiful, as I'm sure is your human one.

God bless you. Kathy

Reviewed on January 16, 2008
FanTABulous write, Cryssa; I can see where you get your poetic talent from: your sister! :) And she's one of my favorites! :)

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed on January 15, 2008
I feel I have lived a cycle of life in the reading of that poem.

Kathy

Reviewed on January 15, 2008
Cryssa,

WOW! I can see where the talent runs...powerful expression here. Tested by time...the fires...the floods, and yet, your resolve shines like a diamond in the rough. Beautiful.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by l West (Reader)
Reviewed on January 1, 2008
Yes, after the fire and rain, we can see more beauty if we only have the eyes to behold it. Love ya

Reviewed by Ted Bossis
Reviewed on January 1, 2008
Beautiful diamond`esk appearances of time~evol_Ted

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on December 31, 2007
A wise write..
I can't old the old grudge..
Welcome to ad..
Have a Prosperous & Healthy 2008
Ron

Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on December 31, 2007
WOW-- did that ever metamorph into a beautiful, powerful thing! I love the last two stanzas-- and the rest too! I'm such a sucker (succor?) for alitteration-- my tongue is still licking my teeth over this one. And I felt the coming of peace right along with the poem. It "works" extremely well. --Your favorite Charlie

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on December 31, 2007
Stunning....

A touch of Dante, Bunyan and Neruda, yet in your own unique way...


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