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Indecision
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Alone
I
Sit
Upon
the
FencE

  Being pulled        in          two directions
-Wavering…
While
The wind tries toppling me.

Fear holds me in its indecisive grasp;
Yet,
I take comfort in the precariousness.

 

I have no secure hold in either world;
But,
            The buffeting of two                              opposing forces binds me
to my perch  


Astride
the
FencE
roost
I
Forlorn

 
 
 
 
 


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 Reviews of "Indecision"
Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on February 25, 2008
I love the layout of this, Cyrssa. Very original, and it gives the snese of indecision or wavering. But I guess somewhere down the road, a choice has to be made!

Reviewed by Emile Tubiana
Reviewed on February 4, 2008
Dear Cryssa, One should be determined to stand tall. One proverb says: One determined man is worth 100 wavering men. Your poem is great and I don't belong to those who like guessing. That's why I prefer controling my path and my direction. I found out that the light that is shining too bright is the wrong one. To stay on course I follow the dimmer light which is more friendly and will lead to the destination. Thank you for sharing this great riddle. Emile

Reviewed by Leo Durrant
Reviewed on February 2, 2008
Great layout. I can see the knife-edge on which you perch.
I loved this line:
" The buffeting of two opposing forces binds me
to my perch"
First off, you can see the two forces.
Second, I love the way you state it. Rather than being "pulled" in either direction, both choices press equally from either side. Ingenious.
One thing I don't understand was "FencE." Is it simply because both the F and the E look like rails on a fence and the capital E balances out the word (just as your decision --and you -- are balanced)? Or is there another, hidden meaning in that E?
Well done. I love things that make me ask questions.
Leo

Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on January 24, 2008
Well done.
This almost sounds to me like it could
be a politician.

Walt

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on January 21, 2008
Cleverly concocted, Cryssa. You convey the feelings of being "torn" apart very effectively. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on January 18, 2008
I like & enjoyed your creative piece
Peace be wit you

William

Reviewed by Donald Beaulieu
Reviewed on January 18, 2008
but not without the power to stave off and defend for you, dear writer, understand the strength that we humans posses and pain we endure. Well written, well built; cool format (I believe in visual word pictures too.
In "The Light," Dream Weaver

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on January 18, 2008
To teeter between two sides is sometimes exhilarating, but eventually a choice has to be made [I think] - else you can not move forward. I like the poem's shape and its words.

Welcome to AD.

God bless you. Kathy

Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on January 15, 2008
What a precarious situation-- It's shape is good too. I love visual poems. Sometimes you have to choose a side, though. I hope the best side wins! --Charlie


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