Ink Blots (poem) by Cryssa C on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on March 25, 2008

Amazing thoughts! There's no erasing the past or someone without erasing oneself. Beautifully penned! My favorite line "...but in erasing you
it removed a part of me as well."

Reviewed by William Potter

Reviewed on February 19, 2008

Wow,
I truly enjoy your writing style

Reviewed by Ed J.

Reviewed on January 22, 2008

Very well Done! I agree that the people we love become a part of us and we lose some of ourelves in their loss. Thanks for sharing.

Stay well and keep writing.

Ed

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on January 21, 2008

I tried to erase you-
but in erasing you
it removed a part of me as well

I know these feelings well, Cryssa. You express deep sentiments very effectively via your verses. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Morning Star

Reviewed on January 19, 2008

Imposable to erased the pain and sadness or the happy
Memories That a love imprinted in your heart/soul
That you can't never be erased only set aside!
Stunning poetic view of your thoughts!
Peace Love and hugsss to you....Morning Star

Reviewed by Charlie

Reviewed on January 19, 2008

There is no substance that erases ink without soiling, harming, spoiling the paper it is splattered on. One thing I've learned however (and from the most amazing woman EVER!) is that when there's a flaw, you emphasize it. And that brings out its beauty. So now, while the ink's still wet, fold the page in half, and form a butterfly. Make the painful words a picture that can fly away... I found your poem to have powerful sentiments, but it's like reading Morse Code... All- those ... dots and --hyphen/dashes... -You've got to give us the key, or we're not going to read it correctly... --Charlie

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on January 19, 2008

Heartwrenching pen, Cryssa; hope you are okay! You are in my prayers! Very well penned; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(

Reviewed by Tony Jenkins

Reviewed on January 18, 2008

It sounds painful

Reviewed by l West (Reader)

Reviewed on January 18, 2008

cut it out Cryssa, you make me cry, but I love you anyway. It was good

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on January 18, 2008

This one is shatteringly penned, Cryssa, deep pain expressed so well.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo

Reviewed on January 18, 2008

Powerful! During my divorce [husband #1], there were indeed aspects of that marriage that I wanted to rid my heart. Interestingly, I realized that I was loosing a piece of me. I changed my mind-set, and decided that they were growing pains, then I didn't loose me in the process. Instead, I gained greater strength.

God bless you. Kathy