Whispers of a Wish... (poem) by Cryssa C on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on March 5, 2008

Crys,
This is absolutely beautiful. You picked perfect lines. Each new iteration gives each line a new meaning. There is something plaintive yet sure here. Great emotions.
Leo

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo

Reviewed on February 15, 2008

The peacefulness and subtle hush in your choice of words makes for a truly inspiring poem.

God bless you. Kathy

Reviewed by Mary Coe

Reviewed on February 12, 2008

So very beautiful and gentle indeed. What a title. Great write.

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on February 10, 2008

Beautiful...so gentle...just like the title.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on February 10, 2008

"Whispers of a Wish...?" or an omen oozing from a subconscious crack of the soul, where dreams easily are converted in nightmares when confronted with a prayer to the Father...

Georg

Reviewed by Susan Phillips

Reviewed on February 10, 2008

I think it's the pantoum's time to make a comeback. I loved this. So poignant and powerful. Sue

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on February 9, 2008

A silent whisper as if carried a summer breeze, so very inspirational and beautiful....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle

Reviewed on February 9, 2008

I love the pantoum form, though I haven't written one in ages. I may have to write some more of them. This poem is beautiful.

Thank you for sharing it!

Jill

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on February 9, 2008

A beautiful write, flows smoothly and from the heart...enjoyed!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Debbie Milam

Reviewed on February 9, 2008

So pretty, I love it. My husband is one of 10 children so God bless you for raising so many children, what a gift and a sacrifice.

Brightest blessings,

Debbie Milam
www.bestyoucanbe.org

Reviewed by Charlie

Reviewed on February 9, 2008

A pretty poem. And I'm so proud of you for "rhyming" longing with sleep! I haven't even started yet. --Charlie

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on February 9, 2008

Superb writing, Cryssa; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on February 9, 2008

Brill, perfect rhyme and metre, done in a hush yet uplifting way...

Reviewed by John Leko

Reviewed on February 9, 2008

...as if vesper...were heard.
beautiful Cryssa...
John

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on February 9, 2008

A quiet and gentle inspirational that has a sense of urgency!
Excellent Pantoum!

ET

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on February 9, 2008

Delicate beauty in this one, Cryssa, well done. I'm going to have to get a book of poetry to learn all of the different forms you and Charlie use!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.